Twilight Sparkle endevours to learn how to paint but finds that she needs help, She befriends a new filly who lives in a house, on a hill, in the white tailed forest. Her new friend is very good at painting and she shows twilight a thing or two on how to paint. Later on Twilight learns that The house the little filly lived in had burned to the ground 50 years prior and that almost all the ocupants perished in the fire.
You should consider doing some serious proofreading and editing. You have unnecessary spaces and line breaks all over the place.
4854466 Thanks, I will. :)