Thomas Hickey is a peaceful upstanding citizen who is an art undergrad studying photography in the USA. He is suddenly (and with out warning,) sucked into a land of ponies and changed into a unicorn by an evil force that plots to use him as a means of destruction. Will he remain true to his peaceful disposition and find his way home or will he be a harbinger of destruction?
Can't say I read a fic that start with an epic crash like that, now I can say I have.
Other then a few spelling mistakes and grammar errors not bad. Also when changing prospectives use a line to differentiate the character view point.
Thanks for the interesting chapter!
Enjoying it.