The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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Wait, the pegasus who was with him?
Oh... OOOOHH!
Rage... Rage is a great motivator. Willpower can transform pain and loss into rage, anger and determination.
Steady Hoof is just a thrall. How much could a thrall possibly know?
mmm yummy chapter, please sir can I have some more?
5870136 Tomorrow... maaaaaayyyyyybe.
5870147 You spoil us
5869565 I figured the animators just aren't allowed to show blood on the show, but NMM managed to really hurt Celestia.
Which would explain why she didn't try harder to talk Luna down, before resorting to blasting her with the elements, in that scene.
5870157 Nothing wrong with that.
Luna thought that the humans wouldn't 'take' what they 'needed' from a terrorist? She doesn't know them as well as she thinks she does.
A terrorist forfeited their chance at claiming 'I have my rights' when they became what they inherently are.
I fear for Steady Hoof.
As sensitive as she is, finding out she was a part of this, even unwillingly, might break her.
And as level headed as the CWG group is, they could be in entirely the wrong state of mind to confront her over this.
Is this story broken? Because new chapters are not showing up in my favorites or tracking when you update.
5872582 You'll have a chance to find out today. I plan to update sometime before I go to work, hopefully.
I stopped paying attention to the unread stories counter on my library link. This and a few other fics don't reliably increment the counter, when they update.
Instead, I check my feed page at least once a day. It's that globe button between the mail button, and the notifications button, at the top. It never fails to show me story updates, and also gives me blog posts that tag stories I'm watching.
5872776 That's how I find out about all the updates.
5872772 That is quite pretty and somewhat intense. This music tells a story. What does this music say to each of you?
5873158 It make me feel like an old and hiddened from the world immortal king walking down the old castle hall sadly remembering the good old day...and how it had fallen.
The site got hacked and now I can't update from my computer, hell I can't even access it from my computer. I am very sorry all, the chapter updates will have to wait until the issue is resolved.
5873912 Awwwww....I'm using computer at the momment...maybe you should try to disconnect and then reconnect and restart the comp...it should help....a way for the network to reset ....and wait for about 15 mins, if it doesn't work then probably tomorrow...meanwhile, work on another chapter...or do something
The find the thrall, but only by their actions, which is too late? or just in time for not full loss?
Thought the Bloodmages would have something, depends on how far they want to go, then again, at the battle, theyve shown themselvs to be far beyond sentient rights.
They're vampires...without the undead part...
5879003 Not the worst comparison I've heard for them.
I'll take a crack at the typos.
"When he loses it" seems more fitting, although it does also make sense if you were trying to imply that Artex is going to 'let loose' his grief later on.
"...Oriana and Razor were lost, as expressed by their puzzled faces..." It seems more natural to use 'by' as opposed to 'on:' Oriana and Razor look lost, which is expressed by their puzzled faces.
Alternatively, you could write "...Oriana and Razor looked lost, puzzlement expressed on their faces..."
"but the word has dual meanings..."
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And now for something minor: I was just wondering what your stance on Oxford commas were, as you didn't use them here:
But you did make use of them here:
It's not a huge issue and it's not a typo per se, but if you could try to standardize the inclusion or exclusion of Oxford commas it would be great!
'huffed irritably'
dual
Wait I thought hord got killed last chapter
6771294
I think that was Henderson.