The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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5223038 Well in regard to a stealthy update, when I worked at Maryview Hospital the nurses called me 'Fat Ninja'.
................ninja...............
Nice chapter!
I can't help but notice that while they make no bones on mentioning the unfortunate slaughter of 4000 diamond dogs, there is no mention of the massacre, is that an attempt to not mar their introduction, it can't be to keep it secret the whole of Humanville will be more than willing to share that story, an attempt not to embarrass Kavim over the error or at least not the families of those who participated?
Also the whole affair with the diamond dogs wasn't really that selfless of the humans, they did have their own survival to take into consideration. After all they had no chance to evacuate if they had I have no doubt the diamond dogs would have found an empty village.
queue should be cue.
Otherwise good chapter.
5223688 Very astute deductions on the first two paragraphs. As for Humans being accepted as a Prime Species, you will have to just wait and see. ;)
5223708 Very true, the Battle For New Humansville was not strictly a selfless act, however what you see here is clever politics at play. First impressions were not so good on either side, but if the Humans are made to seem like they are valuable allies instead of meat-eating aliens, the Kavim at large will be more prone to seeing them as neighbors and perhaps somebody not to shun, but embrace.
On a lighter note I have also thought of a few other sayings the Kavim could take the wrong way, misunderstand or just have a blank look at, I haven’t back tracked to see if you’ve already used any of these however and I am simply forgetting.
-Two birds with one stone
-Fools rush in where angels fear to tread (Kavim: what’s an angel?)
-more than one way to skin a cat
-cat got your tongue
-go cold turkey
-Hold your horses
-Your killing me (in reference to laughter)
-Lets go knockem dead
-kick the bucket
-an arm and a leg
-Beating a dead horse
-break a leg
-curiosity killed the cat
-Don't look a gift horse in the mouth
-every cloud has a silver lining
-elephant in the room
-knock your socks off
-put a sock in it
-my cup of tea or not my cup of tea (I can see Celestia having fun with this one)
-on cloud nine
-what am I chopped liver?
I imagine the Crash who has the best grasp of their vocabulary is the only one who could cause this misunderstanding but how would they react to him asking if they wanted to play a game of ‘hangman’ to pass the time.
5224181 I might just use one or two of those.
...that's your cue...
Other than that, spot on with the spelling (as far as I'm aware).
I'm going to venture a guess that the Kavim journalists in the audience caught onto Artex's fear of public speaking... Let's hope that he doesn't get torn apart too much in the questions period?
5223038 That was a really stealthy update.
5224269 If you do, make sure they are misunderstood in the worst of ways to accentuate the differences in Human- Kavim culture.
5223043 Gorram it! Another stealth update! That's it, time to unfavorite/favorite a few time to make sure it sticks.
5227218 HA! Gorram? You sir have watched Firefly! Awesome show! Too bad Netflix is getting rid of it.
I’ve been thinking, when the first human baby to be born is likely to draw a lot of attention, I can definitely see a stroller or crib surrounded by curious Kavim foals wanting to take a look.
Also how much about human development have the Kavim doctors and general populace been told, will they perhaps be worried that the baby is crawling around on all fours rather than walking on two legs like all of the other humans they have thus far observed, perhaps they will be worried that the magic of Equestria is trying to covert humans to Kavim or that it has been born disabled in some way, after all horses learn to walk quickly after birth.
Have the humans had any information sessions about themselves with the Kavim living in town, I only ask as when Beacon showed up they still seemed to have many unanswered questions and while on an individual basis some of them may have learned some more, with the Kavim moving into their own homes they will be less likely to all be comparing notes on what they learned. With the festival coming up have they thought to perhaps try to make sure all the Kavim have the same correct information to provide to any coming tourists?
Thinking about the coming baby’s makes me wonder, how you are planning to play Changeling reproduction, like ants where the queen is the only one who has children or the same as the Kavim. In which case does their ability to change shape or their genetics give them the ability to have young with other species, sort of an extension of their ability to infiltrate to find love
5228055 Use caution sir, you venture very close to MAJOR spoilers. ;) I like the way you think though, very logical.
You now have me worried that they are going to give birth to antro-ponies causing the human residents to believe they are being converted into Kavim, resulting in them doing something everyone will regret
5228874 Oh shush you. ;)=
5229046 Oh no... OH NO!!! YOU ARE NOT DOING THAT!!!
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Ohmidog you are...
Why do I get the feeling that another group of humans appeared on the planet, this time in the front yard of the Griffin Empire?
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Quick thing, a "Queue" is a line, like a line at a restaurant, whereas a "Cue" is an indication or signal.
Sooooo it was so loud it was a fus ra da
I like how you have him 'pause for dramatic effect' in the middle of a passage riddled in ellipses, which if you wait the time specified for, amount to the same thing.
Roooooooollll credits!
Leonidas be like: "that's my man"
9604835 Lol
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Me, too