A mother's love, a daughter's passion, and a destiny neither of them could've predicted. Just how much is love and life destined in Equestria and just how will it effect the lives of the two ponies connected the most through destiny?
Excellent clop. It's all the more enjoyable for the relationships they're building! I'm glad to notice you entered in the Foalcon contest, too. I'm taking my time enjoying this story.
I know you wrote this a while back, but I'm reading it at the crack of dawn for good reason. this sory is FANTASTIC, and I can't wait for the next chapter to finish downloading. thank you for writing such a great fic
Too much juice. Your clop felt like a play with bad props. The script is decent, the acting equal. But seriously, did you put hoses in their pussies? Like, garden hoses?
Excellent clop. It's all the more enjoyable for the relationships they're building! I'm glad to notice you entered in the Foalcon contest, too. I'm taking my time enjoying this story.
Ah, yes... Fallen Angels...
An outstanding work of literary art, in my opinion.
Well played, ponies.
Well played.
I know you wrote this a while back, but I'm reading it at the crack of dawn for good reason. this sory is FANTASTIC, and I can't wait for the next chapter to finish downloading. thank you for writing such a great fic
Too much juice. Your clop felt like a play with bad props. The script is decent, the acting equal. But seriously, did you put hoses in their pussies? Like, garden hoses?
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As you said, the script was decent, and the acting was equal. And it was good enough to win the contest.
But I've never heard of the "too much juice" thing in any of my clop fics before. So that just might be a matter of personal taste / opinion.