A mother's love, a daughter's passion, and a destiny neither of them could've predicted. Just how much is love and life destined in Equestria and just how will it effect the lives of the two ponies connected the most through destiny?
Thanks, I did slightly more to say why this type of thing is illegal in Rubies in my Punch [which needs my other pre-reader /editors to give it a once over], and I'm happy that the suspension of disbelief wasn't too shattered by last chapter. My reasoning for Derpy's acceptance, at least in my head is a mix of, Chapter 12 big reveal of Derpy's, lots of failed relationships and feeling Dinks is different, having known Dinky since she popped out of the womb [so there's familiarity and closeness you don't usually get for quite a few dates normally]. and idk it's just how it came to me and my editors / pre-readers didn't think to change it.
Could be . After all the line between a pony just dreaming about her, and her accidentally walking in on a dream that she becomes a sexual part of is a very fine line. But either way, Dinky was happy, and if Luna was there, she had a very interesting experience with one of her little ponies.
The kiss was really sweet and sensual! There's a paste error in this chapter. You have the whole thing written twice shortly after this part:
Just delete the beginning duplicate and that will fix it.
Twilight's reaction was good. The bit about the relationship being illegal helps explain why they're nervous about it.
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Thanks, I did slightly more to say why this type of thing is illegal in Rubies in my Punch [which needs my other pre-reader /editors to give it a once over], and I'm happy that the suspension of disbelief wasn't too shattered by last chapter. My reasoning for Derpy's acceptance, at least in my head is a mix of, Chapter 12 big reveal of Derpy's, lots of failed relationships and feeling Dinks is different, having known Dinky since she popped out of the womb [so there's familiarity and closeness you don't usually get for quite a few dates normally]. and idk it's just how it came to me and my editors / pre-readers didn't think to change it.
(And i'm just sitting here reading her dreams like: Luna goes into ponies dreams.... was that really luna?!)
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Could be . After all the line between a pony just dreaming about her, and her accidentally walking in on a dream that she becomes a sexual part of is a very fine line. But either way, Dinky was happy, and if Luna was there, she had a very interesting experience with one of her little ponies.
Yeah, Luna made a vist to her dream scape.
More fun to go around!
Ponies have teats not utters. Teets? Teats? I think it's teats. Point is, not utters. Makes her sound like a cow.