A mother's love, a daughter's passion, and a destiny neither of them could've predicted. Just how much is love and life destined in Equestria and just how will it effect the lives of the two ponies connected the most through destiny?
Derpy getting her hopes up builds good anticipation. There's some good tension with the uncertainty about how she'll react and how Dinky will respond in turn.
Thanks . I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far . I'm two days away from posting the rest of the fic up, and I'm actually quite proud of this fic and how it turned out.
Derpy getting her hopes up builds good anticipation. There's some good tension with the uncertainty about how she'll react and how Dinky will respond in turn.
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Thanks . I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far . I'm two days away from posting the rest of the fic up, and I'm actually quite proud of this fic and how it turned out.
The image below the second note in chapter two isn't quite right. It comes through as just a filename with img tags.
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Fixed. Thanks for point that out .
This is a lot of good sentiment, and I like that, but I feel like it's gonna get really awkward later on.
Ok this is almost to sweet.
Trap card!
I really like how you're telling this in a child's voice. I can almost hear Dinky telling the story.
Ah yes... Twilight the foal fiddler.