Anon became ever closer to Derpy from the day they decided to consummate their feelings to each other. They stood by each other's side through thick and thin, even through the unexpected pregnancy, which led to some unexpected results .
Could use a bit of editing, but cute enough to work. One thing to look for is to make sure to capitalise Muffin (except where referring to the baked good).
Of course Anon thinks that Muffin is the best of both words, now only she is his daughter, but she also has hooves to kick stalions in the nuts if they get to touchy!!!
Could use a bit of editing, but cute enough to work. One thing to look for is to make sure to capitalise Muffin (except where referring to the baked good).
Ahh a fluffy moment to cute.
It's cute.
"It's your turn," comes the sleepy voice.
Now that you sleep with Derpy.
And the aforementioned couple of times when you say "muffin" instead of "Muffin".
D'aaaaawwww
Thank God a new chapter came out.
Perfect imperfections.
Aww.
The cuteness has been doubled!
Damn that's adorable!
any pony that picks on her would need a serious human grade beatdown!
A very cute story. I'm really looking forward to more chapters :3
Damn it, why do the good ones always take the longest?
4790912 Because time and effort are being invested in them.
"Hey there Dinks, this I wake you up?"
did
awwwww that was a cute little chapter I look forward to your next chapter
4789283 i agree in every way, if diamond tiara picks on her shes so fucking dead.
Gotta love the Daddy-type feels
so adorable
4791185 That's probably true.
Um, Phrasing.
I just found this again. Much adorabooness!
Of course Anon thinks that Muffin is the best of both words, now only she is his daughter, but she also has hooves to kick stalions in the nuts if they get to touchy!!!
aaaawwww i'm looking forward to more
stay classy
5136272 the multi verse would explode from too much awesome. derpy shippers are few and far between, as they have to be.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!