Anon became ever closer to Derpy from the day they decided to consummate their feelings to each other. They stood by each other's side through thick and thin, even through the unexpected pregnancy, which led to some unexpected results .
Seems like an odd way of phrasing it. I assume the three are Sparkler, Dinky and Derpy herself, but the phrasing makes it sound like there was an unknown third child before Muffin.
"It was when Dinky brought you to her schoolhouse for show-and-tell, but that's a story for another chapter."
It is then that Anon and Dinky hear a loud noise. Raising their heads to look at the source of the noise, they see a man with a nametag reading "Yoni." Standing in the remains of the wall of their home with an axe. Upon seeing this, Anon quickly counts walls.
Love this chapter.
Also there's the part talking about the story deal.
"She you and her"
I think the she is extra in that little moment.
Great chapter, but there's a very minor thing you may want to edit. You forgot to capitalize Sparkler's name at one point.
I need to stop reading this
I am running the risk of heart failure from the many daw moments
On second though someone plan my funeral
this chapter is just so DAAAAAAWWW!
so much cuteness must le boops
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stay classy
Seems like an odd way of phrasing it. I assume the three are Sparkler, Dinky and Derpy herself, but the phrasing makes it sound like there was an unknown third child before Muffin.
Like candy for the soul.
'Wow.' It was the only word that popped up when Destiny_Ruins saw that the author
put Skyrim into the story.
"It was when Dinky brought you to her schoolhouse for show-and-tell, but that's a story for another chapter."
It is then that Anon and Dinky hear a loud noise. Raising their heads to look at the source of the noise, they see a man with a nametag reading "Yoni." Standing in the remains of the wall of their home with an axe. Upon seeing this, Anon quickly counts walls.
"NOOOOOO! HE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL!"
Also. SKAHRIM!
6088010 Here's Yoni
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OMAIGAWD! I just realized something. Two things, actually.
In two days, this chapter will be five months old.
In two days, I will be
********years and five months old.This chapter was released on my birthday!
6095255 happy birthday then(five months late but hey, who's counting)
Thanks. I noticed a few chapters of random fanfics that were released on my birthday this year.
the skyrim part caught me by surprise and a laughed for what seemed like forever good job
lol
I half expected a centaur.