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I know very little of French... but it looked alright to me
And yay for partnerships! Hahahaha, nice job, nice job!
Good job, and keep it up, keep it up.
I see what you did there.
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How? There is a wall in the way and it's kinda dark...
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I never would have thought of that. You also put an extra U in flavor.
I understand the concept of pragmatic marriages, (I wouldn't have been able to write for the last 2 + years from a middle eastern cultural standpoint without it), but I will reiterate that without mutual trust there can be no mutual security.
Lastly: if Mousy is marrying for Rye's resources; why did she willingly share him on the wedding night, and just now give permission for him having "questionable dealings with others"?
If Rye sleeps around; feels protective of all his other lovers, and dutiful towards the bastard foals he might produce, what happens to Mousy's share of Rye's resources?
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Cadance has not manifested yet. Love as an elemental force is still broken. There is a lot you probably don't understand, but it will make sense if you read another story.
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You think that line is about sex, don't you?
Pervert!
One is a pirate, the other is a grifter. They are both going to have questionable dealings with others. This does not mean sex.
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Well there's still the thing with Starjammer, and encouraging him to sleep with a stallion is a small step to at least giving permission for him to sleep with other mares.
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Monogamy is not a huge priority.
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Rye isn't a pirate!
He's a privateer.
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Good catch.
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Yet Mousy presents her virginity as if it's valuable, and seemed impressed with the fact Rye was too. So it's fine to sleep with random people after your married, but not before? (Not to mention if Rye fathered a bastard, or that you've established STDs are prevalent in this world?)
Also if Celestia hadn't left yet, this would have been a really good time for Spyglass to ask her to assign them a combat surgeon as part of their terms.
Your French is fine, Kudzuhaiku. I'm Canadian and I've heard and read plenty of bad French, yours is quite decent.
Is it me, or was there a Cask of Amontillado reference in here?
6770335 you are absolutely correct
That's one way of putting it.
Nah, it checks out.