“Raven how could you be so heartless,” screeched Queen Chrysalis.
“Yeah, look who’s calling the kettle black,” retorted the irate author as he glared at the towering changeling.
“Uh guys,” said Pinkie as she tapped the webcam mounted on the laptop, “you’re online.”
The two arguing figures glanced at the laptop and turned bright red.
~Twenty Minutes Earlier…
The author sighed at the last chapter’s influx of readers. “Are you still going to use a baseball bat Pinkie?”
The party pony placed a hoof on his shoulder. “Uh huh,” she replied sadly.
“What are you both talking about,” asked Chrysalis as soon as she saw the duo’s vacant expressions.
“My revisions are done Chrysalis,” I author explained. “All this time with you has been a real treat.” His lips were trying to force an expression, but much like his pink host’s, there wasn’t even a fake smile to be found. “Promise not to be a bother to them Chrys?”
“You’re leaving? Tell me you’re joking!”
Pinkie sniffled. “Raven’s going to have to leave Chrysalis, rules are rules.”
“WHAT?!”
Raven cleared his throat. “Chrysalis,” he said sternly, “calm down.”
“But you’re leaving,” the changeling queen whined. “Who will I egg Princess Celestia’s chariot with?”
“I’m game,” said Pinkie as she finally managed to crack a flimsy smile.
“I told you it wasn’t going to be anything permanent Chrys,” Raven said.
Pinkie sighed, breaking the silence caused by her statement. “You know, there isn’t much of a choice in things Raven.”
The author nodded and looked to Chrysalis. “Please promise me you won’t cause any more trouble for them Chrys.”
“I will,” the changeling queen replied. “Just promise me you’ll visit.”
“I can’t unless my paperwork gets approved. Right Pinkie?”
“Yeah,” she said as her eyes drifted towards the nearby bat.
Raven began to pack his things up, making sure to save his laptop for last. “Could take years and even then I won’t be very well off here.”
“I’ll vouch for you Raven,” said Pinkie with a sniffle. “I’m sure Twilight will too. I mean, she delivered your paperwork to Princess Celestia herself.”
“Can I help at all,” asked Chrysalis as she tried to restrain her own tears.
“Keep your promise Chrys and pray that I return soon,” the author said before popping a few painkillers. He hit ‘Publish’ before closing up his laptop and prepared for a swift smack to the back of his head.
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I guess I can live with that
Let's just hope he doesn't get a consussion to that precious little head of his. Or he might have evolved a thick skull as protection? *gets clobbered in return*
3499946 Well 'scuse me for trying to be silly.
im confused. im reading the original. but it stops right before he asks her. where is the rest
3675962 It got to the point where I wanted to revise more than continue. The result is right there for your reading pleasure.
3676107 so this here is the result? which chap is the one to start off on? and is it the same like he not with both yet
3676201 It's basically a whole new story, enough changes were made to the previous one that it changed this one to an extent.
3676227 TIME TO REREAD ALL THE CHAPTERS
3902351 Well, you're nearly done with everything leading up to the present. I hope you've enjoyed what you've read thus far.
4632019 No promises. I'm not gonna say yes or no in fear of people yelling
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and sulking. It also ensures that I am neither bound by or neglecting my word.
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I made sure to do my homework on this before writing it and I wanted to leave it to your imagination as to how it happened cause, you know, CMC + event ≠ logic.
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Question: How much do you consider "little homework" for research? Twilight may as well consider living with Spike how much she knows about dragons and her only real form of research. Just a little food for thought there.