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What he said. Please?

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What they said.

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I'm with them. What they said.

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it would be interesting where you plan to go with pound and im still wondering how cadance fits in this

I think I agree with the author's note.

Great chapter, but a fair number of grammatical errors distract from the otherwise fantastic writing. If you need a second set if eyes, please PM. 'Side from that, extremely well written, though admittedly I was hoping Pinkie would pop in again. I eagerly await the next chapter.

-MilSpec

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Also, do that, please

Very nice!

The focus is still on love, even if it is artificial, instead of control. However, I'm curious if that's going to change and when.

Perhaps Carrot Cake will start with little submission games, which get progressively stricter. For example: A picture I like is having Carrot sit in a comfortable chair while his three girls kneel before him in a semi-circle, their arms crossed behind their backs (pushing out their breasts for his viewing pleasure) and his cock resting on their tongues. Not sucking or licking, but that he's using them as mere pedestrals for his stallionhood. The first one who can't hold the position loses and is then punished. Wonderful for establishing his dominance!

4535435 This is one of the strangest comment I have ever read.

I love it!

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I have many more where that came from.

4535435 You know what I wonder about? How Pound will react to all of this^^ imagen him comming home from flight camp to see them all in that position^^

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Oh yes! That's why the younger Cake might need a harem of his own to keep him busy. That is, if he doesn't join this one ^_-

But, well, if he suddenly came through the door and saw this particular game, his first reaction will probably to do a barrel nope right out of a window.

4621849 prolly, yes^^ You know what im also curious about? If Carrot actually will break the watches control over him again^^