Life is a game, you just need to know how to play it. I learned it the hard way, even if not in the World I was actually born in.
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I haven't read the story, but the summary is full of Randomly Capitalized Words. The fastest way to turn away a potential reader is with a poorly edited summary.
7605095 That's just my way of writing things...
7605102 Don't worry dude, I do it some times too
7605186 1) Thank you for your honest opinion!
2) Yes, about Everfree I was talking about the Weather and how Ponies doesn't control it there.
3) This will be a very rare Type of a Fic where the Adventures of the Main Character won't often touch the Main Plot, other than preventing some thing or salvaging the Spoils that everyone missed or simply didn't care to actually take with them.
I'm looking forward to the chapters to come but I do hope there a mix of skills and interactions like maybe learning skills or spells from someone like I'm sure it not too weird to ask a unicorn how they do a spell to try it yourself like that gem finding spell must be good one to learn or asking for lessons from a class or so I'm sure
Well this looks interesting. Tried plugging those measurements into a simulator and got a horrific monster. Did you use the metric system? To be fair though I've never not gotten a horrific monster from that thing.
EDIT: Shit missed the cm. Ha! Anyway this is an interesting looking character.
EDIT2: Ok that looks much better. She must be what, 1.6 meters? Fairly petite. Realistically proportioned. Nice job. Not entirely sure why the measurements were necessary but that was fun anyway. I like the idea of her just being a scavenger who hangs around and steals shit from the enemies they defeat.
Wisdom should be 23, not 22. She's got two points, not one.
Notice you spelled 'more' as 'mode' but other then that I'm looking forward to reading your story & wish ya the best
Are you gonna take advantage of "ID Create - Empty" to dupe items and stuff? So you can learn from skill books that are one of a kind without getting in trouble :D
You may want to review those body measurements, the ones you used here would give a 25/18 year old woman roughly the body of an underweight 10 year old.
Given the picture, 85 / 68 / 93 cm might be much closer to realistic for your story.
I had a random, humorous thought looking at the Cooking Skill.
Sweetie Belle.
You're Queasy-Immortal and will stop Aging as soon as you will reach the Zenith of your Maturing.
I think you meant Quasi
Quasi- being partly or almost
Queasy- nauseated; feeling sick
I really think you should have made the stat boosts granted by Alicorn be a multiplier, rather than a direct add on per a level. It sill allows the ability to be powerful, but not too much so. Currently with it 1 level for an Alicorn is equal to 9 levels of a normal pony.
Hmm, no hp/mp/sp numbers? Also should have a note of what her starting measurements were as well as vurrent just for a comparison.
7640277 oh! so you know that?
then can you please tell me what Zenith is?
i can't find it on the internet for some reason ._.
7640975 usually it's 21 to 23 in biological age.
So the reputation works by a "threshold" mecanic?
When honored is maxed out the 12,000 points, it just becomes in revered with a threshold of 21,000 and so on.....
I wonder what the "absolute" max is in these kind of things.
I can't really think of any way to grind [Mana Regeneration] other then using up almost all her mana and then using [Meditation] to recover/regen it back quickly
you forgot to add her wings color, just like you did sunbutt.
Also, i wonder if she ever ses nightmare form, because of her mana regen it means she would be stuck as it until she purposedly run out of mana, Yes demoness Moondancer sounds awesome.
i wonder how "detailed" the info. would be if Observe is "LVMAX"
or just ANY "actual" skill at MAX
it just weird and interesting... ._.
7605102 I think that Moony should learn some alt firing magic.. Just firing [Cero] at every thing gets kinda boring to see...... Sorry?
I love the story so far!
7706581 I would guess like when you see Sherlock homes in the 21st century were he talks to a random guy and tells him what he ate for lunch, how he was a soccer player got a leg injury then went into boxing, all because he saw how coordinate he was kicking a can into the bin, a common scar/injury from boxing, and left over food on his shoe, all right, within the span of a few seconds I think I missed some but that's just a basic grasp of what I could gather. Although its already like that now isn't It
Moony should drain more enemies if they are going to boost her stats directly, i can easily see her capping her base stats easily that way, if there vene is a cap or some sort of limit breaker skill to allow one to push the skill cap´beyond, like in final fantasy X, where max damage and HP is 9999, but with a certain skill you can get 99999, perhaps a stackable Limit Breaker? maybe a quest offered to her when she caps one skill, that has as a reward the limit breaker skill? dunno, just throwing ideas out.
Can you imagine having [Giant's Strength] without having [Giant's Body]?
You'd tear yourself apart!
I kind of feel that, in a way, [Gamer's Mind] is a Mental Disorder in and of itself. In a way.
7812198 Perhaps it actually is? We all know how there are some diseases, that actually prevent someone from getting another disease, albeit a specific one usually. So it is possible that the "Gamer's Mind" is one such instance of a Mental Disorder with how it essentially prevents one from expressing emotion subconsciously or during any form of activity, but prevents you from being afflicted with ANOTHER disorder.
The mana cost reduction exceeds 100% how does that work out?
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Have you read The Gamer? The answer is: "Mana Cost Cannot, Doesn't, And Won't, Under Any Circumstance, Go Below 5MP."
Img for [Cutie Mark] & [Summon Spirit] seem broken or is it just me?
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I have, to current release, and I don't recall that rule thanks for the info
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Beyond my general curiosity on her plans for the Sirens, Sunset Shimmer, Stygian/the Shadow and the Pillars of Equestria (creators of the Tree of Harmony), I'm just kind of wondering what she got, now that her INT has surpassed a score of 1k...
She need a crafting skill, if she make the [item] with loot of the instant dungeons. that will make the craft with game effect like the skill book of the ID logically.
Question, do skill upgrade when they are max?
I look at this chapter and see all those boosts..........damn, no wonder she is so badass.