Well this is a good start to a story. I have to agree on the fact that not many people actually think on the negatives to wanting to be in a fictional world. I for one can happily say that I do think on the negatives along with the positives to such things. Anyway the fact that your character wants to remain in the background is actually a smart thing to do. Drawing attention to yourself in this situation is never a good thing since that will make it harder to do what you need to do to be prepared. The looting of the two dragon hoards is also smart since who in their right mind wouldn't take the abandoned treasure hoard of a dragon if they could get away with it? Course just because your character isn't going to actively try to draw attention to herself doesn't mean she shouldn't do her best to get as strong as she could in case things go horribly wrong such as the fact that she has been put into the body of Moondancer or she can't avoid certain things such as the changeling invasion and has to fight off some of the changelings. It's always best to have a backup plan in case plan A fails along with backup plans for after plan B. Having the gamer ability just makes it easier to have the skills to be able to pull off the backup plans in case one of the others fail. Also the idea of going to the library in the old castle is smart since for one there are bound to be many books that could either give skills or be useful in making your own skills. Also since the place is ruined it's doubtful anyone, even Celestia or Luna would question a bunch of books missing since I doubt Celestia took more than just what could be labeled as 'Forbidden' or 'Dark Magic' since I'm certain at the time she was feeling depression from banishing her sister to the moon. As for the bestiary you showed in the story I again have to agree since given the size of the forest I doubt the only things living in it are a river serpent, Timber Wolves, Ursa, Manticores and Cockatrices. Though I do question the part of her referring to the Everfree as 'sane' but I guess it was in reference to the fact that it's the only 'like Earth' spot in the show since everything there, even the weather, works on it's own without pony involvement. Anyway I kind of rambled in this review. In summary, good start to a story can't wait for the next chapter.

I wonder if she can levitate herself or would that need a high-level levitation to pull off? or how about a gamer sky eye skill? the whole guide the character around while having a 360 view of the world surrounding them to broaden their view and assess the situation instead of the first person view sound cool but must be distorting in ways since it might be a mix of complex stuff and skills being used but as harry Dresden like to point out wizards cheat maybe she figure something out once she in a place of knowledge or get an idea for it.

7605201 1) No Spoilers about her Skills.
2) Why would she want a TPV?
7605215 Well...
7605499 Wut?

7605510 Why did you put up the same chapter twice?

7605540 Eh? What do you mean?
7605571 1) Can you link the thing you used for that? I really want to find a proper body-modulator.
2) SPOILER ALERT: STR, VIT and DEX affect the physical appearance so with the progress she will grow physically too.

7605194 That should work well I mean the only time the plot of the actual show should effect this story would be around the time after Twilight remembers that she had friends in Canterlot that she basically ignored the existence of and goes to make it up to them. If anything your character would just have a small(save for Pinkie who seems to have a radar for anyone new in town and Flutteryshy due to her living at the edge of the forest.) chance of bumping into a main character of the show. Well save for maybe business like say potentially enchanted clothes made by Rarity, apples from Applejack and sweets from Sugarcube Corner(stronger chance of bumping into Pinkie) apart from that there really shouldn't be much of a strong interaction with any of them save for again the future episode with Twilight.

Character Progression (Power-wise). Yes.
Story Progression? Well, it's pretty much 10k words of narration, but hardly any meat to the plot, so no.

I'm kinda disapointed. The Gamer concept haven't been well tried in FimFiction, so I was kinda eager for this. Well, I'll watch over this if anymore actually comes.

Very interesting concept, i still don't graps how humanized ponies are different from anthros, is her perspective of the world a human.

Also what is crossing over this fic? this whole gamer view power sounds way too awesome to be used only once.

found it, it reminds me abit of DICE, another nice webcomic that can be made into an interesting fic here.

After reading a bit of the comic at about chapter 28 ( dayum it's good) i can tell that your character feels very robotic perhaps add more emotion for the next chapter, also what rule are you using for skill level development?

I like it so far. Now onward chapter two awaits.

7605817 1) Agreed, and Pinkie can be easily avoided with a certain Skill.
2) Also, I'm still not sure, but I'm definitely going to find a way to make it work with Fluttershy, she's my Favorite out of the Main Six!
7605834 1) Sorry, but this was mostly an introduction and the building of the base here.
2) There will be far more action and Progress later on!
7605862 1) Eh... Is that a question? Sorry, my English isn't all that good so I can't tell what you're asking me about, can you rephrase it?
2) It's a MLP/The Gamer Crossover.
3) DICE?
4) It's her first day and she's mostly using [Gamer's Mind] to suppress her emotions and operate on pure logic. The only thing she feels right now, or at least the biggest part of her feels: fear at her situation, anger at whoever did it and almost crippling level of depression that she in one night basically lost her family, home and friends in one go.
7605978 And soon it will be delivered.

7605602 Never mind.

7606886 Fixed.

7606465 I still don't grasp how humanized ponies are different from anthros, is her perspective of the world a humans?
and that's the corrected version.

Dice is another similar comic where through rolling DICE, characters can enhance their status, like strength dexterity, intelligence, charisma, etc, they gain dice by accomplishing tasks they receive from the game master in their phones.

Really happy to see you back, and loving this intro can't wait to see what happens next! Especially because i haven't seen a good MLP X Gamer yet. Hope to see more soon, Thanks for Writing!

I'm liking this story thus far, and I'm excited to see more of it to come. Great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^

7606925 1) Imagine humans with horns/winds and horse-tails, that will be Humanized.
This is Anthro.
2) Hm, interesting.

7607270 1) Thanks!
2) Can you link any other MPL/Gamer Fic? I found only one beside mine.

7607490 Thanks! I'll try!

This is an exciting twist on a good and true idea. Welcome back!

7607583
The one you mentioned and 'This one' are the only ones I can think of

[Cooking] was easier to digest

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7607783 1) Thank you!
2) Glad to be back.
7608264 Know that one, still trying to work through it.
7608379 Hehehe...
7610978 1) Fixed! And thanks!
2) It doesn't work that way.

This is a humanized ponies fic right? cuz she said "Hand(s)" instead of "Hooves" a number of times and just want to be sure

7611173 Yes.

7616252 I'm using DxD to connect the measurements to the visual representation, so these ones kind of fit.

What would you do if you were to be put into a position like that? And I don't want some crack~ish answer about being awesome, how you will fix everything and how it will be all cool and you will be the King of the World before supper. Reality is a far more violent and cruel think that wouldn't let you simply go out of your way to improve thing without getting the consequences delivering a harsh reality-check right into your face.

This. I love it. Got me hooked so far, and I'm only a few paragraphs in. Keep it up.

holy shit you need an editor/proofreader.

Anthro, (or anthropomorphic) means 'like human', humanized and anthropomorphised are synonyms.

Whether or not you think they are the same, you have to have the anthro tag, or it will throw off people like me who have a mental blacklist for stuff like this, it was actually really confusing for me until I read it in the author's notes.

Tag properly or go home.

You may want to fix a grammatical error in this chapter. Im not sure anyone would want to wear a t-shit

Desperately needs an editor - you'e got a decent setup and even sentence structure, but I suspect you're not a native English speaker and it shows in the grammar. The most immediately obvious examples being the use of words that sound the same but mean different things (unfortunately, many spellcheckers will see a correct word and miss that it's not the intended word to be used) and overuse of capitalisation - I think that's a German thing?

I honestly only knew about it because I was a big fan of one of its FanFictions where it was crossed over with Prototype, out of curiosity I watched the whole thing and was left with mixed feelings

Me too! What was your first cross? Mine was Oskar Osäker: True Omnivore, a best seller. After that, i read all the story i could find and now... now i know all the characters and the episodes of the serie. And i like it. Thanks you for the Han Jee Han part. A lot of people know him and few insert his name in their story. For me, it's a sign of disrespect

I don’t know if its just because I’m tired, but the paragraphs seem a little thick and hard to read.

wait she has read displaced fics before ,right? because then she should know that going back to her home universe is basically impossible .I mean it is possible but it's very hard and takes a long time and lots of power . Now I'm going to list the things she would need to accomplish to reaturn to her universe . 1:she would need to get to void dweller levels of power which is possible with The Gamer powers but it's going to take decades or even centuries . 2: She would need to find her home universe which is basically impossible since there are multiple multiverses and each one of them has at the least a few thousand universes to search through each . 3: it could be possible that the acess to her home universe has been cut off or hidden or even straight up blocked .So this is why I say that she should just give up her old life and try to start anew in equestria because it's basically hopeless .

a Light Ceriseish Gray color

A who of the what now?

9699183
I wonder if the basic idea of "quantum tiretracks" would work, here. I mean, each universe has to 'keep track' of its own objects, lest they fall through to another one, right?

Nobody says it has be an 'active' thing, either - for instance, if you can shake a strainer in a specific pattern and with precise force, you would be able to prevent sand from escaping through the holes. This particular pattern - matched precisely to the shape and spread of these 'holes' - would differ between universes. Assuming this isn't overwritten by the transfer, there could be some way of extracting that information - and then it'd be a simple matter of narrowing the choices down to universes that show similar/identical traits.

Though her having a local body would complicate things in that regard, I assume...

akin of the Quantum Mirror from Stargate's Series

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