Life is a game, you just need to know how to play it. I learned it the hard way, even if not in the World I was actually born in.
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This is what I love about this story. Altering the future of others and challenging philosophies, followed by ass kicking. Simply wonderful.
For once I'll leave you a short comment, and don't laugh I can type less than what I have done before. This chapter is well done. Showed points that made sense and also pointed out the flaws in pony society and how being a ruler actually works. It's a pain to be the leader of anything even a small group so bursting that little bubble is smart and gives Twilight some ponies that will actually be there for her without thinking she should be overly happy.
Girl Tirek brutalized that chimaera trying to kill it.
Brutal chapter, both in action and words. Me gusta.
I laughed... why did I laugh...
Oh yeah, baby! I've been waiting for a new chapter and I am pleased! Well, aside from all those grammatical errors, but this fic is good enough that I could ignore them.
Also!
I can attest to that as I've stepped on a rusty nail for the sake of steppin' on it. Luckily for me, I had my Tetanus shot.
It might just be my paranoia talking, but Kii's thoughts and dialogue either sound like those of the extremely subservient or someone who obeys now but will betray you in the future.
It's probably the former but my gut won't let me except that.
And thus the CMC became the three monster hunters (I hope). Great chapter, I'm excited to see how Apple Bloom fits into things, as our heroin continues to grow her power base. Sure she might not be at Celestia's level in terms of power, but having a super powered force at your beck and call should close the power gap.
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I don't think you need worry about that, her behaviour is much like Gnome's in the comic. She's very young (only just born) and happy to be with her mama, also I think subservience is a requirement of summonings (so long as you ignore the bad guy's summon, as that tends to back fire).
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I don't think Tia is as powerful as we're assuming, given how she operates in cannon I'm thinking most of Tia's stats have gone into LUK and she has a lot of charisma skills. I think Moony may be the first Alicorn (including Twi) who isn't a support class.
Speaking of LUK, I think Moony should work on speed running the first dungeon for LUK cards. Since there is no abyss market here (which is where half of Jihan's power comes from) she's relying on drops for skill books and equipement. LUK would improve both drop rate and drop quality and since she has magic control she could easily turn Shine's -Shooting Star- into -Infinite Magic Missile-. Mix in her ability to fly and she could easily clear the first dungeon in less than 10 minutes... She could get to 100 LUK in a single day while she waits for the girls to approach the shops about the amulet or scouts out Discord's statue.
And thus apple bloom, instead of bcoming a child defender grew up to be an engineer!
Also yay for ruining the cartoon story, i hate fics that treat the original timeline as something fragile and sacred that should not be perturbed, I'm in the world now it is already different.
I think Moony cursed more in this chapter then in any other... while talking to a kid.
Though seeing how she was basically trying to remove wool that been glued, duck taped, and stapled it's kind of understandable
I just had a thought, since Moony now has Tireks -Magic Drain- and gained a Stat increase from eating Timber Wolves... What would happen if she used it on the dungeon monsters?
I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
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next chapter please
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Interesting.........
congratulations ... apple blossom joined your team