I Really like Princess Luna and RainbowDash.
So here we are now. It seems like yesterday that I was kicking clouds, and teaching Scoots to fly. Its insane that Princess Luna saved us and not Twilight. I still wonder, asking her why did she save us? She only answers with a glum You'll see.
Everyday she rises the sun and moon which takes alot of her energy.Which also slows us down from escaping and fixing this wreck.I bet your wondering what wreck?, wheres Celestia?Well shut up and read.
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Well I didnt want to write the whole story I have planned without other fans opinions. so please please please tell me if I should continue the story.
Who else do u want to show up? Let me know, it can be an ocean to any character
Um..grammar. ..and quotation marks.
You just need somebody to proof read and give you some advice.
why not bring spike in.
Nope.
Wow, rude.
Sorry, But sure I'll bring Spike in. And Salvador Dickins, I was sick when I wrote this, and I was angry that my dog had been diagnosed with diabetes recently.
4419248 he just said hes twelve....
4426767 I know, but even so. Its nice, but it needs editing. If you want an editor, then ask. Its not so bad. Besides, age shouldn't be a factor. All you need to do is ask.
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You were diagnosed? Damn-thats rough. I have had close calls (I mean-I'm close to having diabetes. I'm at that level) but diagnosed? I hope you pull through. If you need any help, ask. I'm here if you need an editor or something.
Ok I love that your a young writer but if you need help then ask. I would happily help you.