When the New Kid and the Boys end up in Equestria, little do they know that their game will have more consequences than they could ever imagined. However, they are too engaged into their game to notice.
Im guessing that the crusaders plus butters and new kid reinforce the fence surrounding sweet apple acres and make it the "New Kingdom of Kupa Keep" or NKKK for short.
4255154 Just focus on the fact that if she levels up enough she can unleash the vengeful Plagues of Egypt on 2 certain bullies that deserve to be taught a lesson.
4255639 Especially the raining frogs, am I right? Unfortunately though, you'll problably have to settle for reading it. By the way, I REALLY LIKE YOUR MANE!!!
Did you accidentally post the un-edited version of this chapter? I just wonder because the past two chapters were great, but the grammar in this chapter was so bad that I almost gave up on trying to read it. It's just such a shocking difference that I thought that it may just be technical difficulties.
4256112 I apologize for the quality of this chapter. I assure that i will revise this one as soon as i can. I know i kinda blew it with this one. But don't worry I'll strive for better quality chapters even though it will mean it will take longer for updates. Thank you for your honesty, I appreciate it.
4256207 Dovahkiin (King Douchebag's real name) knows the Dragonshout, Cup-a-Spell, Sneaky Squeaker, and the Nagasaki, why couldn't he teach her? (Oh god I just thought about Scootaloo learning the Circumscythe)
4256362 I'm not sure... He doesn't seem that interested in ANY kind of communication, and that one word he said at the end didn't mean much and he hasn't said anything since.
Outside the train there was a brief flash of rainbow light up in the sky. It vanished just seconds after appearing. A certain princess came down hurling down and slammed down against the train tracks. She lifter her head to the massive engine of the train heading towards her, “Mmmmn,” were her final words. *SPLAT!*
4256440 Its seem the new kid is already using his Facebook abilities to recruit some new friend and Allies. I only wonder who will join their group? Maybe a certain Griffon might show up. And I hope you will add a kick da baby joke in there . And It seem Silver Star will probably become Princess Kenny's personal knight and I'm looking forward to seeing how Princess Kenny will use his charm ability . And I'm also curious to what part the Stick Of Truth will play in this story.
4255588 4255639 4265137 Wow you guys must really hate Diamond Tiara and her brownnose lackey. Look the thing is the certain abilities will be changed, like for instance, Kyle's summon elemental. He won't be able to summon Ike so I'll change it to something that fits the FiM universe. Remember most of the special abilities in the game are references to the show or the movie. (Maybe except the Jew)
So the CMC will have some power from the game and some based on FiM.
4266369 Alright then... So for the sling of David she could probably still use a regular sling I bet... Lol, or instead she uses a scarf with the Wonderbolts logo on it and it's titled the Sling of Soarin. XD For Jew-Jitsu she pretty much just does the same thing, not much change there. (Though it's be funny if she used a giant foam glove...) For Circum-scythe she... Yeah, cutting off other people's balls probably isn't right, so how about... Friendship-Scythe? I dunno, I'm trying to think of her not cutting off someones testicles... For this instance I can only imagine her using her scooter as a makeshift scythe and hitting someone with it. (Cause that shit huts like balls on the shins.) Whirling Doom is pretty cool and I would assume can stay the same. Except maybe instead of a dradle she has an actual spinning top. Plagues of Egypt should be changed to Plagues of The Badlands (Dry hot area like Egypt or something...), as for abilities, the raining fireballs sound fine, locusts should be replaced with parasprites, the sickly cloud of death should be replaced by the launching of several of Pinkie Pie's Baked Bads, while the falling frogs "dead" frogs should be replaced by either live ones that're still alive or by maybe rotten apples.
These are thoughts I have, but this sounds very difficult to do and most of these are just half assed musings that I came up. I am very curious as of how you're going to make her class.
Actually, Stan is the only who hasn't shown up and Twilight is the only one that hasn't encountered one of the boys. It's only logical that Stan would show up at the Crystal Empire and meet her.
Comment posted by DX-1118 C deleted Apr 28th, 2014
Introducing Scootaloo the Jew.
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4254383 Beautiful. This makes a lot of sense, and why do I like Scoot as a Jew?
Anyway, AWESOME CHAPTER!!
Hope the captain gets caught and sent to the dungeon
Attention, if I made a mistake, tell me, and I'll wallow in nothing, because I'm just one man, who is also a writer.
LOLz
Im guessing that the crusaders plus butters and new kid reinforce the fence surrounding sweet apple acres and make it the "New Kingdom of Kupa Keep" or NKKK for short.
lol
Please tell me that the new kid will "teach" the captain of the guard what it means to protect and serve.
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Well done good sir.
So if Princess Kenny just died, does that mean he'll be revive back in their world or somewhere here in Equestria?
Also where's Stan!
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It shall be revealed in the next chapter whenever it comes out.
Lol, though I don't think being a Jew is Scootaloo's style.. Still, nice chapter. :D
I thought that theif would be more Scootaloo's style, who says that there needs to be one of each class you can have two.
Found some things you may want to edit.
You're missing the word "be" between those two.
That should be "no way".
And that should be "Sweetie Belle" since I doubt Scootaloo can be in two places at once.
Well I see you wasted no time killing Kenny.
Eh, fuck it, I'll laugh anyways.
50 bits says the new kid dishes out some cold, hard, JUSTICE!!!
High risk, high reward. That seems to fit Scootaloo pretty well, with she putting herself and others in danger all the time to achieve.
4255127 If I had to guess, he'll show up at the Crystal Empire and encounter Twilight.
4255154 Just focus on the fact that if she levels up enough she can unleash the vengeful Plagues of Egypt on 2 certain bullies that deserve to be taught a lesson.
4255588
Now THAT I would pay money to see. XD
4255639 Especially the raining frogs, am I right?
Unfortunately though, you'll problably have to settle for reading it.
By the way, I REALLY LIKE YOUR MANE!!!
4255703
Definitely, wicked sick. :P
Kinda makes sense now actually since she wasn't grossed out by King Douchebag's fart. XD
4255412 YOU, YES YOU, I like your style.
I can appreciate a mutual enjoyment of black humor.
4255769 It could also make sense considering Scootaloo strives to be like the tomboyish, polychromatic Pegasus speedster Rainbow Dash.
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Oh my god, when she has even greater power than Rainbow...
She needs to learn how to use magic (fart). :D
It'd be hilarious. XD
4256051 The fart is strong with this one.
Did you accidentally post the un-edited version of this chapter? I just wonder because the past two chapters were great, but the grammar in this chapter was so bad that I almost gave up on trying to read it. It's just such a shocking difference that I thought that it may just be technical difficulties.
4256112
I apologize for the quality of this chapter. I assure that i will revise this one as soon as i can. I know i kinda blew it with this one. But don't worry I'll strive for better quality chapters even though it will mean it will take longer for updates.
Thank you for your honesty, I appreciate it.
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Lol, we need someone to teach her though...
Preferably someone other than Cartman.
4256207 Dovahkiin (King Douchebag's real name) knows the Dragonshout, Cup-a-Spell, Sneaky Squeaker, and the Nagasaki, why couldn't he teach her? (Oh god I just thought about Scootaloo learning the Circumscythe)
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Well, last I checked he doesn't talk, so...
Yeah, pretty difficult, huh? XD
4256344 Oh he talked at the end, plus he could right the instructions down if he insists on not talking.
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Thanks again, I have fixed them.
[laughs internally]
4256362
I'm not sure...
He doesn't seem that interested in ANY kind of communication, and that one word he said at the end didn't mean much and he hasn't said anything since.
Pretty funny stuff and I hope the adults end up understanding the definition of Douchebag and other swears, so much more and intensified humor.
4256572 It's still relatively early in the story. I'm sure the author will think of something, and if not, maybe Kyle can use his leaf blower.
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Lol, so much fun... XD
Oh my God, He killed Kenny! YOU BASTARD!
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Its seem the new kid is already using his Facebook abilities to recruit some new friend and Allies. I only wonder who will join their group? Maybe a certain Griffon might show up. And I hope you will add a kick da baby joke in there . And It seem Silver Star will probably become Princess Kenny's personal knight and I'm looking forward to seeing how Princess Kenny will use his charm ability . And I'm also curious to what part the Stick Of Truth will play in this story.
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4255588 4255639 4255703
I also would like to see that happen.
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Wow you guys must really hate Diamond Tiara and her brownnose lackey. Look the thing is the certain abilities will be changed, like for instance, Kyle's summon elemental. He won't be able to summon Ike so I'll change it to something that fits the FiM universe. Remember most of the special abilities in the game are references to the show or the movie. (Maybe except the Jew)
So the CMC will have some power from the game and some based on FiM.
4266369
Alright then...
So for the sling of David she could probably still use a regular sling I bet...
Lol, or instead she uses a scarf with the Wonderbolts logo on it and it's titled the Sling of Soarin. XD
For Jew-Jitsu she pretty much just does the same thing, not much change there. (Though it's be funny if she used a giant foam glove...)
For Circum-scythe she...
Yeah, cutting off other people's balls probably isn't right, so how about...
Friendship-Scythe?
I dunno, I'm trying to think of her not cutting off someones testicles... For this instance I can only imagine her using her scooter as a makeshift scythe and hitting someone with it. (Cause that shit huts like balls on the shins.)
Whirling Doom is pretty cool and I would assume can stay the same.
Except maybe instead of a dradle she has an actual spinning top.
Plagues of Egypt should be changed to Plagues of The Badlands (Dry hot area like Egypt or something...), as for abilities, the raining fireballs sound fine, locusts should be replaced with parasprites, the sickly cloud of death should be replaced by the launching of several of Pinkie Pie's Baked Bads, while the falling frogs "dead" frogs should be replaced by either live ones that're still alive or by maybe rotten apples.
These are thoughts I have, but this sounds very difficult to do and most of these are just half assed musings that I came up.
I am very curious as of how you're going to make her class.
i bet Douchebag can meet Twilight
Actually, Stan is the only who hasn't shown up and Twilight is the only one that hasn't encountered one of the boys. It's only logical that Stan would show up at the Crystal Empire and meet her.
I'll just going to die when Scootaloo learns the castration ability
4306379 Let's find Blueblood
Moar?