Everyone has heard the stories of Fillydelphia, from the Stable Dweller herself down to the lowliest slaves that survived the unspeakable horrors and hardships. Many forget those who weren't slaves or slavers, but they have stories too...
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Damn, you can feel the anxiety (and comradery) of this chapter, part of me doesn't want to find out what happens in the next chapter.
Excellent chapter, as always. The feeling of calm-before-the-storm and the tension are really well captured, I'm eager to read how that pans out.
That aside... I'm only noticing now, but why doesn't this story have the [griffons] tag? Feels like if there was ever a story that deserved it then it's this one.
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Interestingly, I didn't know that was even a tag, and it took me quite a while to figure out that it's added under the character list. Strange, but fixed now. I agree, the tag is very appropriate here.
Nice update
I know that Heroes kept dropping hits at LittlePips adventures and was happening in the 3rd act of her story, but damn all of those "easter eggs" are a gift when you know what you are referencing. Its rare to feel like a story is happening in Pips backyard, and this is perhaps one of the few stories that does it so well as you are. Its nice to see that this story is being brought to completion, but it saddens me that it soon will end.
Nitpick:
"but we spent enough time standing line for Amy's huffs and irritated sighs behind me to keep reminding me. " Is it not missing an in?
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Yep, that's a typo, so thanks for spotting it. Fixed!
And as always, I'm happy to hear when people enjoy the story or appreciate the effort put into it. It'll be over soon, but hopefully it was worth the wait and ride.
Current Objective: Survive
Survive until the Rad-Boom, then stay out of Celestia One's way.