Everyone has heard the stories of Fillydelphia, from the Stable Dweller herself down to the lowliest slaves that survived the unspeakable horrors and hardships. Many forget those who weren't slaves or slavers, but they have stories too...
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Finally got caught up! I love this story, and your update schedule is waaay faster than most I can point to.
I've always been struck by the... realisticness of your take on the setting. The missions, the characters, the way the world works... it's all very grounded, and very believable. Some outragious things happen - Ida getting shot, the Mudcrab with a motor home on it (that needs fanart so bad!), but it doesn't even register under suspension of disbelief, the whole little world you've made just fits it all so well.
This last one, I really like. It establishes a timeline (1 year til The Pippening, realistically), and we see more of the life he's established in the years since then. For a while now I've sort of had a hunch him and Amy might end up together, and now I'm pretty sure of it. Clearly some bad shit goes down since then. Also the fact that they named their daughter Ida is so cute and kinda sad at the same time.
Lookin forwards to where things go from here (and finding out if they ever did end up issuing him a new rifle). Keep it up mang! This story's great.
Im caught up and i cant even.
Kashmir whoohoos with someoonnne heheheheheeee
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I'm really glad you like it so much so far!
I've taken note of the typos you noticed and will be fixing them when I post the next chapter. That'll probably be within a few weeks at this rate.
Note to self, find new ways to keep Kazamir awake.
Suggestions:
Seven megaspell powered alarm clocks
A Dash infused cupcake at every meal
And a rad-rooster in a pear tree