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Yus, New chapter!
So awesome, an update! I was -just- re-reading this a day or so before the new chapter was posted too!
Glad to see some more fall out of the Luna revelations, can't wait to see her reaction to the Nightmare Moon stuff. Candy and Nohta are really unique as far as characters go and I think they're dynamic is something I really haven't seen in any Fallout: Equestria stories, or really, any MLP stories. So I'm glad to see you're still active and writing, even if crud does get in the way sometimes.
Thanks for the New Years Gift! Happy New Year!
6791193 I'm looking forward to when you finish Old Souls, buddy. That's one of the better fics out there. It's just too bad that it's also one of those "hidden gems" in the FoE community. I'd have finished it by now if I weren't so busy writing my own story and reading for the subreddit's EQD selection.
Keep on it! We need another finished FoE Fic!
This is absolutly not a reference to AJ's eyebrow in a fan animation. Right ? ;)
Good to see this updated pal I needed a little motivation to continue my Fo:E sidefic and this being updated alongside other awesome sidefics gives me the motivation to continue! Now if only my friend can finish my cover art
6796676 Why, I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about! I've never seen Anthology 5 and that bit was definitely not my favorite part!
That is not a small number of words. I'll just take this chapter a little at a time.
Not entirely sure why they stopped Candy from examining - I mean SCIENCING - that ghoul girl. She's the perfect test subject, being far less dangerous to the researcher than most other ghouls. And now I'm morbidly curious about what she may have found out.
This line sounds very familiar. Where did I hear it before?
6810870 It's from Rick and Morty, I believe.
6811439 Ah yes, that's right! Thanks.
Finally done with this collosal chapter. Here's my thoughts on the latest part I read.
When Nohta was irradiated by the Glowing One, I had a thought: Feed her some Dragon's Breath potion and have Lily fly her around and point her at the nearest bad guy that isn't healed by radiation. That'll be so badass, a living pony flamethrower!
Tell me you're already planning to do something like that. And by 'tell' I mean don't tell because that would be spoilers and DO IT.
I love it when she gets like this, because I agree with everything she says. Sometimes I pump empty shotguns just for the sound.
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Saying the ghouls here are worse than anywhere else in the wasteland is an understatement.
Interesting. Candy can't understand half of what the Goddess says because she's half Zebra. Almost forgot about that little bit of trivia. Genetics are weird.
Can't believe I thought for a moment that the Goddess would be nice to her. Given what I know that is a very stupid thought.
6821573 I'd really love to write from Nohta's perspective. A long, long, long time ago I was actually tossing around an idea that would have allowed me to do just that. Originally, every other chapter would have handed over the narrator-ball to the other sister, allowing us to hear from both of them. I ditched the idea in favor of focusing on Candy, but I still wonder what could have been.
Unfortunately, the only way to do that now would be to start up a side-fic to Sisters. That almost seems... conceited, somehow. And with this monster already eating up all of my spare time it would slow the already sluggish update schedule of Sisters. Not to mention I'd just be rehashing the same exact story through another character.
Maybe I can pull off an in-between mini-chapter after we finish up this major arc. It'd be a bit of a stretch, but I'd be lying if I said the idea isn't appealing. I'll bounce the idea off my editor and see how he takes it.
6823237 Oh I realize that it's too late now, I don't expect you to suddenly change the story partway through. I was just noting that from a personal standpoint while I felt Candy worked as a protagonist Nohta would have excelled.
I read your story and I'm really glad of that.
I think that following a character who was raised in a society with a lot of censure in a universe that we know is really interesting and I enjoyed a lot when Candy find out about the Goddesses and discovered that every religious education that she has was false but the reader knew it since the beginning.
I also like the character of Lily a lot. Will something serious append between her and Candy? Will it be good? Who knows...
But there is something that disturb me. I don't know if you did it on purpose but when Candy's father swear in some French-looking language he use some words weirdly or the words aren't well-placed.
If you tried to wrote in French
Should have been "C'est dégoûtant, putain! Que tu prenne la lumière, salope!"
And
Should have been :
"Avec la Lune comme témoin"
I'm sorry to be bothering you with petty detail but I'm French (it's explaining my poor English) so I can correct you, and it might help you.
I hope that the next chapter will come soon, you let us with so much tension with the foalnapping of Notha made by the alicorns.
58k word chapter... Shit. I don't think I could keep a singular narrative I could consider a chapter for even half that long. Hell, I average at 12k, and this is still a sight to behold. Yes, chapter length (or even story length) doesn't necessarily have to be long, but it's still a sight to behold…
~ Neon Lights
6913264 Oh, thank you! I was a little worried about the French. The guy that helped me with it seemed to know what he was talking about, but It's definitely not my native language. I shouldn't be using it too often, but I'll take all the help I can get.
Is this story dead?
7601412 Not yet! Chapter 9 is sitting at about 40k words right now. By my estimate the whole thing will probably come to around 60k before my editor and I get to pruning. Hopefully we'll be able to tone that down at least a little bit, but there's a bunch of stuff to cover in this one. Luckily, he's already started on the first 30k of that, so once I finish the rest it shouldn't take long.
I'm sorry. I'm terrible at keeping folks up to date on the story's progress, and this particular chapter has taken much longer than I thought it would due to some personal and professional issues I needed to take care of first. But we are making progress, and the story will continue. I can promise you that.
7527019 Thanks for the feedback, and sorry it took me so long to respond to you. I've been pretty busy as of late.
There are certainly a lot of references in Sisters. Some of them subtle, like the Dune reference in Chapter 5, and some of them not-so-subtle, like the Skyrim reference in Chapter 6. I like to throw them in to help inject a little silliness into the story, but I can understand that not everyone enjoys that. I'll leave it up to the readers to determine if they're into that sort of thing or not, but hearing feedback on it does help me out quite a bit. Thanks again!
so.... got a date for the next update? or well, anything to show that you are still alive?.
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Let me check myself real quick...
Yep. Still got a pulse. At least I can do that right.
I honestly had no idea that the chapter would take this long to get out. I do apologize for that. Things have been pretty crazy on my end for a long time now.
I was hoping to have this next chapter out by the end of January, but it looks like we're gonna have to push that back to February now. The one thing that I can promise is that the next chapter will come out just as soon as possible. I'm terrible at working with specific dates, but I think we're just a few weeks away from publishing.
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thanks for showing that it's not dead. i can't wait for the next chapter, been waiting for ever but well, it takes time sometimes.
well crap, now i need to reread every thing.
8043287 Kurwa, it's screw granades for us!
hmm so a few weeks is about five/six months. OH! it's okay guy's! he is just using valve time. we must be getting it soon!. unless he is using gaben time....
man i want this story to update.
The last chapter is like a river of convinient pushes of the protagonist into bigger and bigger messes. Up until halfway I belived that Nohta and Lily orchestrated somehow that the Red Eye slave hunters and ghouls arrived in perfect moments to make the situation dangerous but at the same time give evrypony a chance to survive. But considering Psyker is a thing, she orchestrates evrything to push Candy into whatever she wants use her for without damaging her too much.
Altruth I have to wonder if Nohta will get refound for the time(s?) she doesn't get perks. As in getting more next time.
If Candy's necromantic abilities can mess with unity, that might mean that products of zebra alchemy might cause the green alicorn to disconnect from Unity. New companion? I mean- I don't know what else might join to contrast with the current crew while at the same time be on the same level on the 'messed up' scale.
So... update? It's been over two years, man!
well it has been six months. still nothing. over a year and a half now and what?, one post stating that it will be a few weeks?.
i think its safe to say the one of the best foe story’s is dead.
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We're actually editing the next chapter right now. I just take too long to get anything out. I'm sorry.
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*jumps up and down behind you trying to peak over your shoulder*
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One of these days, I'll have read all of the stories Ember's "Castle of Glass" video referred to... After all, that's what got me to discover "Sisters."
Love the chapter and the story. I'll be waiting patiently with all the other unfinished foe stories to update
literally the worst sotry I've ever read
wtf
gawd
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You dont know good literature then...