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This is very good I love your two main protagonist dynamic
A wonderful beginning. Great how the initial lack of concern drives the Protagonist to tell her tale.
Fantastic prologue, couldn't wait to read chapter 1 :)
(It's now 4am here, I'll read the rest later ^^)
Beautiful prologue, dude. I know the prologue 'implies' that the reader is heartless and unmoved thus far.
But, uh, that ending to the mother's letter kinda hit me a bit harder than I wish it had.
Stable 76 .w.
Hehe, imma continue reading, looks good so far!
Embellishment.
Oh boy, let's open up the gates for sunshine and rainbows!