3953560 Could you point them out, please? I'd like to see whether or not you mean actual mistakes or just spelling and grammar differences such as how I write 'colour' and Americans write 'color'.
3953696 It's supposed to be the mask's voice. At the end of Fable, when you get the choice to destroy or wear the mask, it talks to the Hero, trying to convince him to wear it.
3953561 probably not in this case as 'Jack' already knows Jack of Blades personality as it was stated in the first chapter... Of course the mask might have... Somehow Surpressed his knowledge about its true natur.
I think it would have been more dramatic if you did the whole line of 'Jack of Blades is back!' But thats just my opinion, great chapter. Feels slightly rushed, but still good.
Correction, I believe that's the ending of the extended version or DLC of Fable, I believe it's called "The Lost Chapters".
If someone hasn't played "The Lost Chapters" but instead only finished "Fable", they genuinely might not know.
In "Fable", the mask is given as a trophy (though I believe you can still wear it, and cannot take it off if you do) when you first fight and best Jack, whereas in "The Lost Chapters" it's a quest item, remaining until you face Jack's ultimate form, which then gives you the option to wear or destroy it.
3972564 Fable Anniversary. It came out on the 6th. It is a full up-graphic remake of the original with the Lost Chapters, made to commemorate 10 years of Fable.
3973330 it's a revamped, HD version of Fable the Lost Chapters. Of course its goddamn worth it. i still need to replay the original and maybe get Fable 3.
3973761 why replay the original when you can play a better version of it? Also, a question to any one who has played Anniversary: is it a revamp of "Lost Chapters?" or of the original original?
5634276 The memes, Jack! Okay in all seriousness, wrong Jack. Though I kinda wanna see how Raiden would do against Jack in a fight. Would an HF blade cut through the Sword of Aeons, or just clatter harmlessly against it?
When I turned back, I saw Luna had made her way near me, saying, "We apologise for the rash actions of our subject. As an apology, we offer the use of a guest room within the castle and we shall see if we can meet thy request in the morn."
Why postpone his question? The Night Court is still going, right? It would be easier to just ask right away.
"Jack is Back!"
If he knows enough about Jack of Blades to cosplay as him, then he should really know about the nature of his mask.
This story is more interesting than I thought it would be. I did notice a few mistakes that you'll need to fix.
3953486 dosn't take much to dress up, you just have to know what they look like
3953471 Good old AC/DC.
Best Australian band ever.
3953560 Could you point them out, please? I'd like to see whether or not you mean actual mistakes or just spelling and grammar differences such as how I write 'colour' and Americans write 'color'.
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A loud clop resonated as the pony presumably stamped his hoof. "Her and now. I will teach thee whom thy better is!"
Unless you did mean "Her and now", I think it's supposted to be "Here and now".
Earlier I could have sworn that I saw a misplaced " , I guess not.
3953617 Ah, thanks for pointing out the missing E. I don't know how I missed it.
3953617 Fixed
I read the small font in Jack's voice. I'm not quite sure if that's a good thing.
3953696 It's supposed to be the mask's voice. At the end of Fable, when you get the choice to destroy or wear the mask, it talks to the Hero, trying to convince him to wear it.
3953561 probably not in this case as 'Jack' already knows Jack of Blades personality as it was stated in the first chapter... Of course the mask might have... Somehow Surpressed his knowledge about its true natur.
Correction.
"Thou shall show this being in when we hath taketh to our throne."
The last sentence when he shouts: "Jack Is Back!" Should have been more dramatic than him just letting it out.
But the rest of the story was freaking awesome. Keep it up!
I think it would have been more dramatic if you did the whole line of
'Jack of Blades is back!'
But thats just my opinion, great chapter. Feels slightly rushed, but still good.
3953717
Correction, I believe that's the ending of the extended version or DLC of Fable, I believe it's called "The Lost Chapters".
If someone hasn't played "The Lost Chapters" but instead only finished "Fable", they genuinely might not know.
In "Fable", the mask is given as a trophy (though I believe you can still wear it, and cannot take it off if you do) when you first fight and best Jack, whereas in "The Lost Chapters" it's a quest item, remaining until you face Jack's ultimate form, which then gives you the option to wear or destroy it.
Can't wait to see how Twilight react's when she learn's she is kind of the reason Jack is free again.
Jack is back. Back again. Jacky's back. Tell a friend.
3954108 I'm aving that full line for when he reveal his freedom to the princesses at a public gathering, like the gala or something.
3953976 Thank you. My Old English is a bit rusty.
3954450 Oh really?
I wouldn't know. I've only played Anniversary and that's how IT ended.
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3955750
Not taketh. Taketh means take.
They taketh the thing.
They hath taken the thing.
"Jack is back!"
gave me chills
3958070 Like I said, my Old English is a bit rusty.
Oy, that's a really nice story you have there!
Great work!
3959716 Thanks
Can't the real Jack go into dragon form? And this Jack is turning into him right?
3963027 Only when his 'human' body is destroyed nd the mask remains unworn, he takes on a dragon form on the other side of the Bronze Gate.
God I need to play Fable the lost chapter again
3970345 Or you could just get Anniversary.
3972406
what's that?
3972564 Fable Anniversary. It came out on the 6th. It is a full up-graphic remake of the original with the Lost Chapters, made to commemorate 10 years of Fable.
3972952
...i must find this
3973247 I assure you it is well worth it.
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it's a revamped, HD version of Fable the Lost Chapters. Of course its goddamn worth it. i still need to replay the original and maybe get Fable 3.
3973761 why replay the original when you can play a better version of it?
Also, a question to any one who has played Anniversary: is it a revamp of "Lost Chapters?" or of the original original?
Well. It looks like it's time for Jack... TO LET HER RIP! *pffrrrrt*
Goddamnit...
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The memes, Jack! Okay in all seriousness, wrong Jack. Though I kinda wanna see how Raiden would do against Jack in a fight. Would an HF blade cut through the Sword of Aeons, or just clatter harmlessly against it?
Why postpone his question? The Night Court is still going, right? It would be easier to just ask right away.