"So, what are our options?"
Gold Caduceus looked to his brother, Silver Lance, then sighed. While the two unicorns seldom saw eye to eye, the young doctor had promised to do what he could to help his new foster niece. However, there were limits...
The two, and Silver's wife, Platinum Print, were seated in the doctor's office in the Shadowfax Center For The Handicapped. Doctors in the Shadowfax center specialized in the treatment of ponies and other creatures who were handicapped in one way or another, or were at risk of becoming so. There were a number of success stories in the hospital, such as ponies that many thought would never walk or fly again regaining their abilities.
However, even with magic, there are limits...
"Regarding her voice," Gold began, "There's not anything that can be done. I can't say for certain why, but there appears to be something wrong with the her vocal folds. She can't make any sort of noise originating from the throat. If we knew more about changeling biology, there might be steps that could be taken, but I wouldn't count on it. I've run across similar cases in young colts and fillies, and they were permanently mute. I fear that she'll never be able to speak... But I think you both knew that already."
Silver Lance and Platinum Print both nodded. Silver said, "We'd heard the same from the other doctors. That's why we came here. Her condition might not be able to be cured, but it can be overcome."
Gold nodded, smiling, and said, "You are absolutely correct, and that is one of the founding principles of the Shadowfax Center. I've already consulted with a few other experts here in the center, and we believe we may have a viable solution I had to ask for a favor from the princesses, but they were happy to help in this case. However, before we go into that, there is something that I feel I should bring to your attention..." The doctor tapered off, uncertain of how to start...
Platinum said, "Well, what is it?"
Gold sighed, then asked, "Do you know whether or not she can change her appearance?"
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Ling sat in the playroom of the clinic, waiting for Silver and Platinum to finish speaking with uncle Gold. While she didn't really care if she couldn't speak, she supposed she could humor her new parents. While it would be nice to be able to speak, to sing, and all that good stuff, she'd long ago adjusted to her disability...
"Thanks for coming with me, Rainbow Dash," said a voice from the hallway.
"No problem, Scootaloo," another voice replied, "Twilight was headed this way anyhow, and since your parents were busy, they didn't mind me coming along with you for your checkup."
Two pegasai, the older one blue with a rainbow mane, and the other orange with a purple mane, walked into the playroom, escorted by a nurse. The nurse said, "You can wait here while doctor Gold finishes with his guests."
The two pegasai stopped in their tracks, staring in shock at the little changeling...
Seeing the expression on the two pegasai, the nurse said, "Ah, don't mind her. Her foster parents are seeing the doctor right now."
Rainbow Dash stared at the nurse as though the earth pony had sprouted a second head, and said, "But... she's a changeling..."
With a shrug, the nurse asked, "And that means she doesn't have the right to treatment like anypony else?"
The pegasus blushed, then said, "Sorry, I guess you're right."
The smaller pegasus walked over to the little changeling and said, "Hi! My name's Scootaloo. What's yours?"
Ling smiled, picked up her chalkboard, then wrote, a piece of chalk clenched between her teeth. When she was done, she held up the chalkboard for Scootaloo to see.
"Ling," Scootaloo read aloud.
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Silver and Platinum both stared at the doctor in shock. They'd been prepared for Ling being mute, but this... this went well beyond anything they were prepared for...
"The injury appears to be long healed, but whatever caused it did significant damage," Gold continued, his expression severe. "So much so that several organs that we believe assisted in the regulation of magical energy in her body were completely destroyed. While not life-threatening, it would have caused her to lose many, if not all, of the abilities normally associated with a changeling. She can still absorb love energy for sustenance, but anything beyond that will be impossible for her."
Silver rubbed his chin in thought, and said, "While I wasn't expecting this, in a way, it isn't surprising: The fact that when we first saw her, she was out on the streets without any sort of disguise, should have told us something..."
Gold nodded, and said, "Yes. My primary concern is that, unlike her muteness, this isn't something she was born with, but something that was done to her afterwards. The overall pattern of the scar tissue implies that she may have been attacked by some sort of wild animal. Further examination implies that the organs in question were removed afterwards, potentially because they were infected or damaged beyond repair in the aftermath. Whoever did it used very crude tools, but in spite of that, did an impressive job in patching her up."
Platinum Print placed her hoof against her mouth to stifle a gasp. That Ling was such a small child, and have gone through so much was... startling. The fact that, in spite of all that, she was such a cheerful, happy child was nothing short of a miracle...
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Scootaloo, her head tilted to one side, asked, "So, you're here because your parents want to see if your voice can be fixed?"
Rainbow Dash watched the two as they played with a set of building blocks. Well, play wasn't the right word: under Ling's direction, the two were building a rather impressive tower. If Dashie had been in possession of a camera, Scoot would have wanted to take a picture of it when it was done.
The changeling had an eye for art, the pegasus had to admit...
Ling nodded in response to Scootaloo's question, placing a set of blocks in place near the top. After a moment's thought, she flew down from her perch, then wrote a question on the board...
Scootaloo read the message, then said, in a whisper, "I'm here because my wings don't work like they should. The doctors say that my wings are 'underdevoloped'. I can flap them really fast, but they're not big enough to keep me airborne. The doctors hope that I'll have a growth spurt soon, but if it doesn't happen in the next year or two, I'll be stuck as a groundwalker forever."
Ling wrote a question on the chalkboard. Scootaloo read it, then said, a little bit upset, "Of course it would be bad!" She looked on the other side of the tower the two were building, making sure Rainbow Dash didn't hear that, then turned back to the changeling. "My parents are both really, really good fliers. My dad was a recon flier in the guard for five years, and my mom used to be in the Wonderbolts. When I was born, they were both looking forward to teaching me to be as great a flier as they are. Rainbow Dash is a better flier than both of them together, and she took me under her wing last week. I have to be able to fly, or I'll disappoint everypony who cares about me..."
Ling wrote a message on her chalkboard. Scootaloo read it, then her jaw dropped.
Written, in nice, fanciful letters, were the words, "If they care about you, then it won't matter whether you can fly or not."
Scootaloo opened her mouth to respond, then shut it, and after a moment, she said, a little angry, "And how would you know that?"
The changeling wrote a new message on the board, set it against the tower, then raised up on her back legs, and Scootaloo saw something on the changeling's tummy that she hadn't before: a very ugly looking scar. Scootaloo turned towards the chalkboard and read the message there...
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Two years ago...
All she knew was pain.
Bitten on the belly by a basilisk, it felt as though her tummy was filled with fire. The only reason she was still able to move at all, instead of being a stone statue, was because it was a baby one that had bitten her. However, the damage was done: the organs that the venom reached were turning to stone, one by one. Slow or fast, she'd still be a statue by sunset...
Through eyes half-closed in pain, the little changeling saw her big sister, speaking with the doctor. 'Stilts' asked, "Can you save her?"
The doctor looked at the little changeling on the table and said, "I can, but it's going to come at a price. The organs that have been touched by the venom will have to go, as well as those around the affected area. That's going to give her an even worse handicap than just being without a voice: without the ability to change, can you really call her a changeling?"
Queen Chrysalis, who the little changeling always thought of as 'Stilts', because she was so tall, looked down at the little girl, and said, "Whatever she may become, she will always be my little sister. Do it."
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Scootaloo read the message written on the chalkboard.
"I was bitten on the tummy by a basilisk when I was little. To save my life, the doctor had to pull out the pieces that the venom turned to stone. Because of that, I don't have any magic inside of me like other changelings do. I was sad when I found out afterwards, but my big sister Stilts told me that it didn't really matter to her whether I could change or not: she'd love me just as much."
Scootaloo's jaw dropped as she read that. So... she wasn't just mute, she couldn't do any of the stuff that other changelings could do? That was...
Ling wiped off the board, then wrote something else there. Scootaloo read the message on the board, then smiled.
"What you can't do isn't important. What matters is what you can do. Don't let the fact that you can't do one thing keep you from doing a thousand other things. We are more than what our disabilities would make of us."
Scootaloo gave Ling the biggest hug she could, and said, "Thank you." After a moment, she wiped her eyes and said, "We'd better hurry up and finish: I can't wait to see what the tower looks like when we're done."
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Silver Lance looked down at the little necklace that Twilight Sparkle had handed him. After a moment, he asked, "So this is it?"
Twilight, freshly minted princess of the realm, nodded, then said, "That's it. She just has to put her hoof on it, and think of what she has to say. The charm will do the rest."
Looking at the charm, Platinum Paper said, tears forming in her eyes, "Thank you, your highness."
Blushing a little, Twilight said, "It wasn't a big deal: it took a little bit of research to find the right spell, and from there, I just had to swap out one line so that it would work on any creature, instead of just a pony."
Silver Lance smiled, and said, "Well, I think it will be a big deal to Ling. Would you mind coming with us when we give it to her? I'm pretty sure she'll want to thank you in person."
Princess Twilight Sparkle giggled, and said, "I'd be delighted."
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Rainbow Dash, with Scootaloo on her shoulders, and Ling flying beside her, put a tiny flag atop the majestic tower just as Silver, Gold, Platinum, and Twilight Sparkle entered. While said in different tones, their reaction was universal.
"Wow..."
It was a work of art: action figures and dolls stared out of windows, manning the ramparts that surrounded the building, with little swords and spears in hoof, or were perched on little waterspouts like gargoyles. It almost came to the ceiling, all of it with incredible, almost unspeakable, detail. It almost looked like it could have been the real thing. You'd definitely want to have this as your refuge if you were ever shrunk to mouse-size.
...It's amazing what you can do with those little interconnecting blocks.
Ling held up her chalkboard, a message written on it...
"Go get your camera, mom, quick!"
Giggling, Platinum Print rushed off...
Silver slipped the necklace around Ling's neck, then said, "According to her highness, if you put your hoof on the stone, then think about what you want to say, this will do the talking for you. Give it a try, and we'll see how it works."
Ling nodded, and placed a hoof upon the stone. After a moment, a dull, monotone voice said, "Testing, one two three.."
Twilight blushed and said, "Sorry about that. It'll take a few adjustments before it'll start sounding more natural... WHOA!!!"
Twilight toppled over, as the changeling tackle-hugged the princess. Her hoof still on the gem, the monotone voice chattered, "I can talk. I can talk. Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you."
After the changeling was disentangled from the princess, Platinum Print returned with the camera. Smiling, Ling and Scootaloo posed in front of the tower. With a click, the moment was immortalized...
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On a nearby rooftop, Top watched the proceedings with a feral grin. It had been a few weeks since the little changeling had arrived, but this proved what he had suspected: she'd wormed her way into the hearts of the guard commander and his wife. Even if they'd only known one another for a short time, it was clear now that the commander would do anything for the child, even ask a favor from a princess. Finally, there was a way to get what he needed from Silver Lance.
The diamond dog turned towards his underlings, and said, "Alright, get everything ready. At the first opportunity, we'll strike."
New chapter up!
Ling's a cutey. :D
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Indeed
Ok. A rifle is in my closet. Somebody get it. We're hunting dogs tonight..
That was beautiful
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I'll get my shotgun
Moar!
3957483 Nah, get something more accurate..A long-range, so they can't smell us..
Chry... C... C-C-C-C-C-Chrysalis?! I did a double-take to make sure I hadn't read that wrong. Huh... I guess it's a matter of time before we see how that little bit of information turns out. My conspiracy board is gonna be overflowing with sticky notes now...
Ling's words about disabilities... damn. Dem feels! I will admit though that I was reminded of Katawa Shoujo; it sounds like a line that would probably have been said in that VN.
Aw goddammit, if those damn dirty dogs get even a scratch on Ling's adorable chitin...
3957550 Screw long range, I've got the rocket launcher! Lets blow em up before they can run~
3957598 Hey, what if they already got Ling? Would you shoot her? No? Then rifle.
Little does Top know, if anything were to happen to Ling, a certain Queen would make him wish she would have killed him.
THe only thing I want to note is Bulk Bicep can fly and his wings are the same size, if not smaller, than Scootaloo's so size alone isn't the problem (none of the Pegasi or Alicorns could fly with their wing size really) my only personal hypothesis is that there is some sort of internal magic flow in all the species that allow their various feats, with unicorns performing more arcane style magic, and earth and pegasi pony magic being more chi/ki/chakra like, allowing for physical feats that ought to be impossible including for Pegasi flight. So in this hypothesis something is blocking/hampering the magic flow within Scootaloo's body preventing flight.
Of course this hypothesis has no evidence and no way to test... why must pony science be so cruel as to deny us episodes devoted to pony biology?
3957550 *pulls out M 107* This long range enough for you? Now it's time to put a dog down...
3957661 Nah, we ain't putting him down..We're gonna fix him.
O_O... Say what?
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can I do a plot twist, or can I do a plot twist?
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The writers haven't come out and said that Scoot is handicapped in the show, since that would be too sad. But you know something? If you do it right, you can make it a triumph instead.
3957879 Indeed. It was a good foreshadowing/addition/plot twist for future reference. All in all, a good development and progression.
3957890 I still want to believe Scootaloo will find her wings some day.
AMAZING!!!
I read a Scootaloo story where the reason given for her not flying was that her breed of pegasus can't fly until they are grown-ups because their wing muscles & wings develop slower than other pegasi.
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There are more ways to fly than just flapping your wings.
Why are you so good at everything you write? I jealous.
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Hmm... my only rifle uses black powder, though, and I'm out...
Oh, well, I live in Texas, I GUARANTEE I can find something
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That's similar to my theory. While unicorns are able to manipulate their magic using their horns as a focal point, pegasi and earth ponies have their own inherent magic running through there bodies, focused in the wings for pegasi and the hooves for earth ponies.
This also kinda coincides with another theory of mine, where most ponies actually have a mix of the three magics within them. While alicorns are the only ponies that possess characteristics of all three races and can fully utilize the magic of all three, all ponies have some mix, with the most concentrated or powerful magic determining their race.
This could account for how, say, two earth ponies (like the Cakes) could have a unicorn and/or a Pegasus. While some might say it's simply genetic, I would theorize that a pony's magic is also genetically based in some way, which is supported by both Twi and her brother being such powerful magic users.
I also like to point to Fluttershy. Her connection with nature would seem more fit for an earth pony; this, combined with her less than stellar flight skills lead me to believe that, while at least half of her magic is Pegasus magic, thus determining her race, a large chunk of it is earth pony magic. In comparison, I would theorize that Dash's internal magic is nearly 100% Pegasus magic. The same goes for Twilight and unicorn magic, and (although its harder to tell, seeing how earth pony magic is much more subtle) Applejack with earth pony magic.
And no, I have no theories about Pinkie. I like my brain intact, thank you very much.
...Why are changelings given so much love, while Diamond Dogs are always condemnedas villains?
...Why are changelings given so much love, while Diamond Dogs are always condemnedas villains?
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OMgomgomgomg!!!! So AWESOME!!!! *Squeeee* This is great! I love this univurse!!!
The center of a shadow is called the penumbra!
Hnnng
I am liking to think that Twilight took a lot of convincing to give Ling a charm instead of panicking and going crazy.
3958193 Meh, come to my house, we got plenty.
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It just so happens to also be the name of Gandalf's horse. Of course, plenty of hospitals are named after historical figures or major charitable contributers
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Because changelings are at least slightly cute, while Diamond Dogs are pretty ugly and freaky looking?
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, thank you. Your appreciation, as always, is much appreciated.
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Yeah. Right. The broken bug monsters with the empty blue eyes are cute, while the oafish dog trolls who are awkward and pitiful failures are freaks who deserve our scorn.
Hmm. Something seems wrong here...
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Yup. Catapult!
3959133 Really though these stories are totally fun...
Very effective use of Twilight and RD. It makes sense for them to be at the hospital what with RD being Scoot's honorary sister and Twilight being asked to make the amulet, her being the magical super-genius that she is. I feel like the effect it made was done a lot better than most could have managed it since the focus still stayed centered on Ling.
People keep forgetting that "disappointing your loved ones" isn't the main fear for someone who may be handicapped. It's the fear that they're crippled. And all the feel-good messages about being "handy-capable" are bullshit in the face of that.
Especially in a world of magic where they can cast spells to walk on clouds, pour rainbows in a cup, make wings grow....
Sliver, Platinum, and now Gold? Is there another pony named Copper somewhere in that family tree?
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Seems like a bit of a bombshell to be dropping in chapter two, though. Now you've ruined any surprise you were hoping to get from us when the big in-story reveal comes. In fact, that entire little passage felt really tell-y and could probably have been taken out without messing anything up aside from causing minor confusion on who "Stilts" is. From there you could have revealed it to be a nickname, hinted that she's a Very Important Buggy, tossed in some foreshadowing, all leading up to the climactic Big Reveal.
But now all that is out the window, and unless you have a good reason for why you did it, you're probably kicking yourself really hard for it right now.
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Also, does this mean Silver and Platinum are technically Chrysalis's parents too?
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I think it's a combination of their body shapes and general attitudes.
The Changelings were "villains" and look fairly frightening, but they're still shaped like ponies and (Chrysalis aside) were quiet, efficient, and relatively subdued (they didn't intentionally kill anypony or cause wanton, pointless property damage).
The Dogs on the other hoof looked like werewolf-gorillas with particular distaste for personal hygiene and acted like the quintessential Dumb Brute: loud, obnoxious, simple-minded, and rude for no apparent reason (There's also the whole enslavement-thing they tried to pull). Personally, I think they'd be a lot cooler if they'd had a good leader, or if we'd gotten a better insight into their culture than what could have just been a gang of bandits with a mining operation.
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I know, I just can't stop making that connection whenever I see the name now. xkcd strikes again.
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There is truth in what you say. However, look at the Equestria Girls version of Scoots: she had no visible disabilities, no crutches, no wheelchair, no nothing. That being said, it can be argued that her inability to fly could be equated, on earth, to be something similar much less severe: like a handicap that might prohibit her from playing sports or serving in the military, but would not hinder her in living a healthy and active life. Her big fear is that her family and RD would act like Hank Hill's father (from King Of The Hill, naturally): they'd hold the fact that she couldn't fly over her head as though it was something she herself was to blame for.
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Not really. Think of it like a Columbo mystery: We the audience, get to see the drama bomb in advance, but the characters don't get to hear about it until much later
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... What's a "Columbo Mystery"?
Anyway, that sounds like an incredibly silly thing to do with a story. If it was a significant part of an actual conflict, like seeing the bad guy's monster before the hero faces it or watching a bunch of independent plans crash into each other, then that would be different.
But this is just... there. Yes, it will doubtless be important later, but it does nothing for us to know it now and will make the actual in-story reveal something of an anticlimax because it is no longer a drama bomb.
What it is is an elephant in the room. It's big, it's there, and everyone is aware of how big and there it is, but it's not actually doing anything besides being big and there. Eventually everyone will get used to it and just start to ignore it, and when the real reveal come their reactions will be "Oh, yeah, that's a thing," not "3957827" or "3957593"
Also, as an aside note, I apparently replied to the wrong comment and have edited my previous comment to rectify this, so if you get a weird extraneous note, that's why.
Really like this chapter, it's great.
3961139 As in the show Columbo. It was before your time.
Read Gold Caduceus as Goldbeard Cedaeus (big Monster Hunter critter) at first. I know what a caduceus is, just musing aloud. Thoroughly enjoyed the center's name too.
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Either I'm too old, or you're too young: Columbo was a detective show that lasted for many years. What made it unique was the fact that at the beginning of the episode, we would see the commission of the crime, as well as the steps the criminal would take to hide their guilt. The thing that made it dramatic was this: Columbo would often be speaking with the criminal alone. We know the guy in question is a murderer, but Columbo doesn't. It's called a reverse whodunnit.
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I guess because Changelings seem cuter with them needing love to live while Diamond Dogs just want gems because their greedy. Yeah, the dogs live underground and are brutes but I don't consider them ugly, either, especially since one of my dogs kinda looks them
Why is it that when I think of both Ling and the antagants for this story, all I am thinking is like a pony version of "Home Alone".