If only I had known anyways good chapter look forward to the next

oh god we need markiplier to cameo haha but oh man great chapter dude

Good job sir. Quite a good show.

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That's what we've got so far. Let's hope they mean something.

3872623 Figured it out.

3868266 A gaming group that I play with, never mind

3872493 Now that you mention Celestia, I can kinda imagined that if she were to retaliate against Isaac with an anti-gravity spell... well, we wouldn't be reading this if we didn't have our own fun with zero-g.

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Grav jets and mag boots son!
Keeps Isaac leveled and down to Earth.

Shining Asshole... Nice xD anyway I look forward to next chapter with cadence.

3873013 Exactly, just a thought.

Also great story by the way.

Awww...Isaac didn't get a chance to break Rarity's mind with the fact that every pony in Equestria is pretty much naked.

Thought I smelled a Markilier reference with that "fuckity fucking fuck".

3871701 It's pretty sexy yea.

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Yup, fucking flawless.

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I have school to go through, a paper to write, and s trimester to finish. As soon as I get to spring break, expect one every two days.

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It's probably just me, but Isaac seems very out-of-character. He's cussing way too much, he would never 'puke rainbows from the adorableness of Flutershy', and wouldn't attempt to bash Rainbow's skull in, just cause she jumped on top of him. She didn't attempt to stab him, shoot him, cut off his limbs with a plasma cutter then stomp on him, slice him, puke on him, blow him up, stab him with a screw driver, or attack him in a large pack, she just jumped on him and tried to question him. If he reversed her pin on him, that would have been fine, but trying to smash her brains in was too much.

And the convo with Rarity was very confusing. "I'm not ready for it." Wtf was she blabbing about?

And everypony was pretty quick to get out of bed and gather at town hall 2 seconds after the "meteor" came down.

Speaking of which, eveypony was pretty quick to assume the "meteor" was something alien. What if it was just a normal meteor? They've seen meteor showers before.

I probably sound like a big booty, but please don't hate me.

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You're very correct. Isaac IS out of character here (no offence to the author. Just a fact).
I don't think you sounded like a big "booty".

ISSAC CLARKE, NECROMORPH SLAYER AND ENGINEERING EXTRAORDINAIRE!

wouldn't attempt to bash Rainbow's skull in

I would try to do that if I went through the shit isaac went through.

This is good.

Needs major improvement. Character speech is wrong, characters are OOC, grammatical and punctuation errors, the list goes on.

I think the s fc is a work of art

What type of vintage suit issac has I know it's the engineer suit but what type the dead space 1 or 2 or 3 or is it like the fully upgraded from 1 or just the standard engineer vintage suit also is his rig fully upgraded and staysis as well I'm just curious

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Agreed, past self. I want to read the rest of this story, I do, but it needs major improvements because at the quality it's at now, I just don't see myself reading it.