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I liked the parts with the interrupting Pinkie(as usual), but this chapter was a bit short
Or I read it too fast... that's a possibility too
I think I did
Good chapter. Only downside is that 4th wall breaking pinkie moment. It REALLY broke the flow of the story. I mean, come on, here we have a life or death scenerio happening like the ones we often see in the dead space games then all of a sudden, pinkie. Comedy has its time and place. This isn't one of them. I suggest putting that part down.
get pinkie out of the story
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There, edited out.
Celestia better not do anything mean to Issac or I will Bitch slap her through the screen
4562744 thank you
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I wrote it on a Plane to Florida.
This is good, but it feels so short maybe it's just because it described only the event of falling. But I loved it can't wait for more. Can you maybe do the pinkie wall break in a future chapter I liked it but it was a flow breaker.
Fucking Royal Guard, I bet they're full of Unitoligists...
4562955 Wow. That is...something
This is yet another good chapter.
This wasnt realy about the rainbow factory, so why is it called rainbow factorie part 7?
MUST. HAVE. MORE. CHAPTERS!
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Because it establishes the fact that in all else, f^ck the Rainbow Factory.
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I'm honestly surprised that this managed to make any kind of sense in the end.
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ah. I see.
this was still a great chapter though
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Thank you.
4564036 Somehow, that seems normal good chapter though. You sure know how to entertain mate...
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Good to know, thanks.
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TREVOR12300 USED BITCH SLAP.....IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!
4564435 xD
And that means the corrupted Pinkie Pie is next with whatever excuse it is she has for turning ponies into baked goods.
Would Miss Cheerilee and Big Macintosh be coming up soon?
4566045 no baked goods. Baked bads.
A massive chunk of the factory what?