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I hope that's just pony naivety speaking....
Cliff hanger!!!!
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Oh fuck the hell yes it is.
3898189 Yeah, it's totally not like Celestia secretly executes 1,500 male ponies every month for trying to rebel. No, the ratio of men to women is purely coincidental.
You forgot Cadance's screams of terror once she sees Issac's memories of the necros. And that's just based off a educated guess.
WaIt, Cadence openly implies her marriage is not that exciting... Shining Armor get your battle face ready, Cadence might go to another stallion.
Hey the longer the chapters, the better. Always try to go for as many words as you can.
(Within reason)
estimated time before next chapter?
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About a week or possibly this Saturday.
Cliffhangers why you do this ?
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Why do humans do anything?
Uh... please try not to do more of these. They rarely fit any story at all.
Of course it is your story but that's exactly why I'm saying about that, need to have some criticism after all!
Also, that Fluttershy-part in the end where she slid down to his shoulder... I am now imagining an extremely cute Fluttershy sitting on Isaac's shoulder and I think the sheer cuteness of it is making me insane •-•
Loving this story so far, I've had already a lot of moments I've laughed out loud :D
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It was kind of a one-shot thing anyways, just to let you all know about what's coming next in the line of the stories.
Too long. TOO LONG. You have gotta be kidding, write 10k words just write MOAR! JK Write at your own pace, as long as the story stays good I am happy.
3898453 Nah, those will scare the shit out of her. What will kill her is watching Issac's not one but TWO girlfriends/wife die. Get ready for the dark shit!
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Hell the Fuck YEAH!
3902686 Ah, okay then :)
3903030 OH RAH! HERE COMES THE GORE AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh man I love a good gorefest.
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Here's PINKIE!
check isaacs heart?! NO DON'T GO IN THERE!
....well cadence it was nice knowing your sane self prepare to enter a world of bloodshed and carnage watch out for the brutes!
3898784 it has been a week :P
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Trying to decide on whether I should dump Cadance into the end of the Shit-storm that is Isaac's love life or go by absolutely EVERY FUCKING DETAIL.
3937716 well, if she is looking at his memories to determine if he is a threat, and he is severely mentally unstable, Candace would probably get to the ishimura incident and then pull out of his mind and huddle in a fetal position for the next few days.
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Or see the end of Ishimura and then see Nicole thrash him aot
you will know when you see it
Hello, pot, I'm kettle.
Not in my story Celestia. In my story everyone around you is dying and you can't do nothing about it except finding for help.
What? No "Sunshine, sunshine ladybugs awake!"?
Hey, how ya doin'?!
Dropped.
No and no. I can NOT read this. I tolerated the last few chapters because of the low number of Dead Space fan-fictions. The errors, the poor choice of story-line, and god forbid the Out-Of-Character Isaac Clarke. I'm sorry if I sound harsh, but I fav'd this with hope and feel like I've been stabbed. I'm going to make my way out now.
I mean, street gangs, and almost punched attacked you,
almost punched attacked you,
punched attacked you,
pretty good story
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I laughed there, even though it was a mistake. I just couldn't stop thinking:
I'M GONNA PUNCH ATTACK THE FUCK OUTA' YOU!!!
The way you write Pinkie's randomness, the syntax, the characterization, hell, everything. Shows just how much you've evolved from... this.
Now for a word of warning: you better rewrite this as you write the sequel. You don't want your readers only skimming this to know the plot overview instead of reading it with proper investment.
Team Four Star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh yeah issac let cadence look in your memories and let her see all good times you had playing shoot limbs with the necromorphs good idea that'll be a great memory 10/10 besides does anyone think issac a bit to edgy because he is acting a bit to ooc
you do realize... that now you are doomed to write just such a crossover?... you said to pinkie that you would, and that counts as a pinkie promise..... and you KNOW what happens if you DARE try and break it......
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Right, well, I wrote this as my first project on here EVER. This was back in about 2013, 2014. I've long since forgotten most of what happened in this fic and I'm cringing so hard rereading this that I'm afraid my face will actually implode.
I'm probably going to do a rewrite of the major parts in here.