The Royal Guard this, The Royal Guard that, It always seems to be the Royals Guards. At a young age I was always the kid who wanted to sign up for her Majesty Guards. You know the cliche for country, honor, duty, and for the crown. My family were happy when I said that I wanted to serve the crown and the people of equestria, and tell me, "That I will be a great Royal Guard". Yet I don't want to be a Royal Guard I hate STANDING at attention and have to stay still for half of my life. I want adventure and see the world. When I was ask if I was going to join the Royal Guards I said no. When I told them that they were completely shock. They ask "Then way did you tell us all of this dreams of serving Princesses and country" . I look a them with a smug " I never said I wasn't going to join the Guards. I just wasn't going to join the Royal Guards"
" Then what in tartarus are you going to do?"
Oh I hope they take this well, "I'm joining The Bronze Guards."
The grammar!
you need to re-examine your whole interpretation of the written english language because this is bad. I like the concept but god damn proof read yourself or somthing.
yep I'm not proud of myself about this it was a spur of the moment kind of thing.
might go to the drawing board and start form scratch, or I can salvage this ship and have something "nice" looking.
You know what, screw that I'm going to finish this with the best of my ability and give this a awesome ending.