Pound and Pumpkin have always been closer siblings than others, and as they went through their lives, Pound helped Pumpkin through some of her worst moments; including moments of heat. This time though, they go a lot further than they ever have.
I loved it! It had incest, anal, dirty talk... What's not to love? We desperately need another chapter with the parents listening in and getting turned on.
"Why eggnog.....u made pound fuck his sister......and u always spread joy....but now u speard incest" that is wut my friend was yelling all day. But I have to say that the story very well composed
That was a fun little read, very glad I happened upon this story. I only wish I had some background for the beginning, but en medias res is a fine way to kick your fic off as well and it certainly worked out in your favor. And while there really ain't nothing quite like bumping uglies during bath time, you could've lingered a little longer with the bathing and grooming build-up, would've definitely added some more immersion to the foreplay, but aside from that this was a nice bout of incest.
“Oh, Carrot, rut me like there’s no tomorrow!” They heard their mother mockingly shout, making the both of them scream in disgust and run to each of their rooms, hoping to get a bit of silent rest after their relief.
Personally, I like my eggnog with a splash of Baileys.
Well that was a funtastic read. Always did enjoy the idea of the mares of the MLP universe succumbing to a heat cycle and the incest is just the freaky filling in this little taboo tart you've served up, dear writer. If I had any complaints it'd be that you haven't made the incest seem taboo enough, it's too readily accepted. It's just not that sweet Apple of Eden if it isn't forbidden after all. Although these two seem oddly familiar with this whole easing Pumpkin's heat ritual so I'll work under the assumption that this ain't their first rodeo and they're past that point in their relationship by now. Nontheless a fun quick read, you should be proud of yourself, friend.
“ Oh, Carrot, rut me like there’s no tomorrow! ” They heard their mother mockingly shout, making the both of them scream in disgust and run to each of their rooms, hoping to get a bit of silent rest after their relief.
I love eggnog.
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As do I.
As do I...
That...
Was pretty good.
Nicely done, mate.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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You honor me, Lurker.
I give you my thanks.
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Quite welcome, man.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I will tell you the truth. I've never had eggnog.
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You're quite possibly missing out.
It's one of my favorite drinks; I had nine half-gallon jugs last Christmas.
3809941 Why is eggnog not sold year round!?
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That's one of my biggest complaints!
3810088 My grandma knows a recipe for homemade eggnog, but it's just not the same.
Ha, they used the same punishment I used when I caught celestia and starswirl that one time. That was a golden moment.
...
Feels wrong to say but...
It was a nice read. Actually hilarious at moments too.
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Good job.
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
...
Kinda.
It's just that kinda thing that you like, but you don't want to, and- it's...
Yeah.
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Lol, I know what ya mean.
But it's cool.
At least this gives me another author to look into reading his/her stories! [you] for entertainment!
I loved it! It had incest, anal, dirty talk... What's not to love? We desperately need another chapter with the parents listening in and getting turned on.
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I might do that as a bonus chapter. I'd have to see about how I could work that through, though I've had ideas on how to do that already.
dat ending
I shouldn't like this. But I do.
I love this!!!
Welcome to the Cakecest clan.
I should make you some cookies.
Great read, good work and I'm am always happy to see more Pound/Pumpkin fics pop up on the site.
Though the beginning seriously made me want some eggnog.
"Why eggnog.....u made pound fuck his sister......and u always spread joy....but now u speard incest" that is wut my friend was yelling all day. But I have to say that the story very well composed
i dont even like eggnog, but i am suddenly craving some
. . . shower sex? fuck yes
That was a fun little read, very glad I happened upon this story. I only wish I had some background for the beginning, but en medias res is a fine way to kick your fic off as well and it certainly worked out in your favor. And while there really ain't nothing quite like bumping uglies during bath time, you could've lingered a little longer with the bathing and grooming build-up, would've definitely added some more immersion to the foreplay, but aside from that this was a nice bout of incest.
Loathe,
Your Antagonist
Personally, I like my eggnog with a splash of Baileys.
Well that was a funtastic read. Always did enjoy the idea of the mares of the MLP universe succumbing to a heat cycle and the incest is just the freaky filling in this little taboo tart you've served up, dear writer. If I had any complaints it'd be that you haven't made the incest seem taboo enough, it's too readily accepted. It's just not that sweet Apple of Eden if it isn't forbidden after all. Although these two seem oddly familiar with this whole easing Pumpkin's heat ritual so I'll work under the assumption that this ain't their first rodeo and they're past that point in their relationship by now. Nontheless a fun quick read, you should be proud of yourself, friend.
Loathe,
Your Antagonist
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That ending
I laughed my ass off.