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Not entirely sure I agree with how the mare was suddenly dropped out of the spell without reason or question, but overall not a bad chapter. You know, if gore and cannibalism is your style. I'm surprisingly indifferent.
EDIT: does kinda feel rushed or forced out, though...
I came
3993273 Forced out or forced in?
3994237 I like the cut of your jib
I enjoyed part one but I could have gone without having to read the rest. Can Spike join Twilight in the Rarity part of whatever this is. Even Twilight would be shocked.