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too short in my opinion but i liked it
No offense, I didn't like this chapter, Twilight ponynapping Rarity and raping her.
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It was tagged... you didn't have to read it...
Was it just the idea of it? or anything other than that?
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Okay. Let's answer the points.
1-I'm glad I decided to ask then.
2-I totally understand. It gets a little monotone and boring if the same characters are used over and over again, right?
3-I'm liking most of your chapters, so far. My favorites are the ones where the female(s) take charge. Particularly the one with Celestia and the FluttershyxRainbow Dash one.
4-I'm not in any rush. Take your time. I just wanted to make sure you hadn't forgotten about it. What, with all the writing you have to do.
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Cool. I'll start yours now, but if I get stuck, i'll go onto something else while i get some ideas to complete yours.
Vore isn't a strong point of mine, the same as scat. :/
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I see.
That's completely fine. The story is yours. Also, like I said before, I'm not in any rush. Just take the time needed and write at your own peace.
Also, I wrote a couple of pony themed chapters and would like your opinion about them. It's a sequence of chapters.
1-http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1508196-Not-Another-Musical-Fan-Fiction/map/124
2-http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1508196-Not-Another-Musical-Fan-Fiction/map/1243
3-http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1508196-Not-Another-Musical-Fan-Fiction/map/12433
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The first one was... I don't know where it was from tbh and the colors hurt my eyes :(
The second and third stories were nice. You had some errors around, but overall they were sweet. Plus you didn't really describe much, maybe you wanted it like that, in which case, it was ok.
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You're right. I wanted it like that. After all, the point of. both, the chapter and the story in general is the MUSIC. Not the story per se. And sorry about the colors. I tried to match the characters with the colors that represented them best.
After reading this chapter I don't know how to feel
I have to admit, this one left me wanting more, but it was in a good way.
The idea that Twilight secretly foalnaps ponies to use for her personal pleasure, while I don't fully agree with it, is a fresh idea to me and a nice read. I always find clopfics where the ponies are all, in general, as good-natured as you'd expect in the show, and it loses a sense of realism to it all. I mean, yeah, it's great to keep it all in character, but sometimes I wish that I could see someone's more... twisted take on a similar situation. ( I suppose I get this desire from shows like Criminal Minds, because directly after I read these more evil versions, I immediately want to know what made them like that, and my imagination just fucking takes off, lol. There's no helping my adventurously analytical side )
I like the way you portrayed Twilight's mentality as well, though I think it would have been a bit better if you took it up a notch or two, just to kind of relay the complete-ness of this sort of broken mentality that I picked up on slightly. ( Or maybe it wasn't suppose to be too obvious? In that case, good job, lol )
One last thing I must admit, and this one will be more of an opinion than anything else, is it kind of felt watered down that Twilight's first torture method of choice was rather... weak. I got to see a couple flashes of the dominance and complete, unadulterated control issues in Twilight, and wanted a little more. I really expected her to pick something that would help personify these traits, or something to further assert her superiority with. Or at least something more... creative? ( I think my personal torture device of choice would be a pear of anguish, either paired or augmented with a vibrator. But my darker side simply wishes to test the limits of the mind in an effort to break it. Not to assert dominance or attain ownership. ) Again, this is more of just a personal opinion than a critique. I certainly wouldn't claim to understand how the mind works. Just how I think it would.
I also liked how this one was focused less on the sex, and more on the characters themselves. Clop is great, but without a story, it's just simply fap material. This chapter was definitely a great deal more compelling than most.
All in all, this was a good read, and a much appreciated break from the monotony of lovey-dovey and feral impulse styles. I'd love to see what Spike thinks of all this when he realizes that best pony is locked away in the cellar and branded a sex toy. Would he protest, or take advantage of her? Could go either way, if you ask me. ;3
N-n-noooo!
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I'm a quarter of my way through the prologue of this, while working on the Nightmare moon x Twilight Vore one.
I want to explain how she came to be and her struggle with accepting herself...
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I'll be sure to keep a look out for that chapter then. :3
this was good but i really liked the archdemon story too
This needed to be longer
yet another good chapter, could have been longer yes, but good none-the-less.