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wat?
Oh come on! Twilight was suppose to fix her dammit!
Something something contrived ending.
The story was... okay...
To be honest with you, this feels like it was a first-time clop writing.
The whole of the chapter was cliche and predictable. Any level of emotional impact the writer was trying to achieve was abandoned by the fast pacing of the scenes. The grammar is pretty damn off compared to normal, and compelling story-telling was obviously ditched for the sake of sheer... "creative" fantasy ( with way too much fantasy and not enough creativity ).
To sum it all up into one phrase... Cheesy as fuck.
The storyline still has some potential, and while I hope it wont be murdered outright, I'll be keeping my expectations in the negative under the assumption that it will not improve anytime soon.
Yay, sequel! :D