Great chapter. I can't wait for the next.

Jesus how long was it from the last chapter?
Nonetheless thank you for updating.

I've got a major problem with the sizes you are terming for the girls' figures, but otherwise it's a quite well written story. A K-cup is a size which looks very large on women with rather large stomachs, an "hourglass figure" as you've put it can't easily work with anything larger than a DD, maybe an F-cup. also thin people to average people can only actually move with up to around an F. I had a few other glaring issues, but I cannot recall them at the moment.

4043759 Well that problem is an easy fix! Just forget about the mentioned cupsizes and imagine the mares' breasts the way you like 'em! LOL!

I'm glad that this story came up with a new update. I read the first chapter when it came up but couldn't comment until now. This is shaping up to be a great story. I cant wait to figure out how the romantic triangle you described in the description of the story will develop. Keep up the good work.

I liked this cgapter but you made feel hungry with that food images man, thar not cool

Your description on women these days, is spot on you wise mother focher you. This was an awesome chapter.

Are you still going to develop that of Adam falling for Twilight and ending on a love triangle? Or that is going to change too? Also later on, would you show how he slowly win over the mares? maybe starting with Shy or Rarity? on the next 2 chapters?

Keep up the good work I can't wait to see how this all turns out. By the way will this be a one on one romance or a herd fic?

Cool can't wait for more

4044326 Then go and get yourself som-a that food! LOL!

4044959 The description says Love Triangle man. The human is in love with one pony babe, another pony babe is in love with the human, neither one of them admits their feelings for a long time.

4044688 Yes on all questions! The summary is still developing. Adam will fall in love with Twilight, Pinkie will fall in love with Adam, neither human nor pony chick is going to be admitting their feelings, and then after many chapters we shall see who gets who.

Also, Adam did promise to strive to earn the mares' trust as a friend. What, you think he's not going to keep that promise?

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I don't know he seems very terrifying and knowing Twilight, she probably will inform Celestia using some loop hole to make Marcus see that he is just lying boy is Pinkie going to be furious with Twilight.

P.S: If Celestia is in fact ashamed of what she did, and want to make peace to Marcus…hmmm I wonder if friends with benefit exist on your world

4047503 Interesting speculations! I don't wanna spoil much however I will say one thing: No Celestia/friends with benefits shipping! Also I'd love to hear if you can find a loophole in Adam's conditions. I think it's pretty tight! :D

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I had one, but I don't know if you prefer if I said it here or in a PM, also, can I request one FWB shipping?

4047574 Sure, let's share a few lines. Write me a PM! Also explain what is a FWB shipping!

Wait, an update....FUCK YEAH!!!

Good chapter. The fact that you're trying to set up the relationships without it going into mindless sex makes it all the better. This story is gonna be great.

Plus I'm going to admit that I'm interested in seeing how Celestia will react to Adam, as humans still exist.

Nice chapter. Keep the update train rolling

If you guys are looking for updates, from now on I'll add them to my Author's notes.

4075767 Uuuuuuhuhuhuh! Uuuhuhuhuh! Somebody gets my reference! Uuuuhuhuhuhuh! Cool! Uuuhuhuhuhuh! Huhuhuhuh! Huhuh!

This is going to be entertaining to see how adam deals with this hormones. It is sad no matter how many times I see it that the good guy gets delt the bad cards.

4085454 Don't worry! The issue with hormones will be talked about in the next chapter. As well as the ones that follow it! There's a build up a brewing!

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Dude, I've been waiting for months! I thought you gave up on this story! I'm off to read chapter two. Brohoof! /)

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YUSS! Very good. I enjoy this style of writing you have. The new chapter was fun and well worth the wait!

Oh, and, when rainbow is saying "Dont you hurt any of my friends especially pinkie or I will buck you up good", I just imagined this:

http://youtu.be/mSDfxde8fSg

At about forty seconds into the video.

Good work.

~Pix

This has sat on my "to read later" section far to long. Can't explain how much i want more of this series.

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Me in nutshell

I like it, It needs to be continued.
My fav part is that ponies do not go crazy or start giving weird looks when they see a human for a first time. Its much more logical for a worls feeled with different races.

He thought as his “hotness scanner” went over the large thighs, accentuated waist, perfect abdominals and massive titties, bouncing with each step the mare took

It's.... over 9000!!!!!!

4766564 That reference is SO overdone, Vegeta is probably pissed right off

I feel like there's a lot of development that Adam and Twilight has to go through before they even THINK about crushing each other as they, especially Twilight, don't seem to trust each other at the start.

Oh my god the intro of the chapter! It's too much!!! Hahahahaha!!!!!