Based in MadMaxtheBlack's Your Human and You setting, a human brought to Equestria spends 5 years as a pit fighter before being 'rescued' by Cadence, begins some time before the events of Season 1.
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Pfft holy shit that last part
Oh god, "he's a sex demon from Tartarus!" That is one of the better lines. I like how you are doing the side b of things and potentially answering who actually sent the Pegasus.to give him the avocado. You also flesh Blueblood out a bit more as well.
Awesome chapter
Quick question, are you intentionally changing some parts of the chapter that overlap? I've noticed that not all of the dialogue matches up with the regular chapters, and even some names change slightly ("Mile Stone" versus "Milestone").
For some reason, that made me think of this...
I got to admit that these side chapters really clarify the normal ones and add depth to the characters. Celestia's emotional turmoil and her desire for love, especially the alicorn love,were very well-written. Additionally, the part with Sun Chaser makes more sense when I combine this chapter with its original counterpart. BTW, good job humanizing (in the emotional sense) Celestia by portraying her as capable of feeling conflicted, as well as showing that she is capable of loving stallions...and a mare.
P.S: Was the mare that knew how to taste alicorns related to the Apple family? For some reason whenever I think of an "experienced" country mare I cant help but think of a young Granny Smith.
P.P.S: is it weird to feel embarrased for asking the question in the P.S
These are always fun to read... I may have already said that at some point... Oh well. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Celestia has a lot of problems. Percy's statement about her was right. She really is a school teacher in charge of children. Very cruel children.
Hmm, Blueboy what do you have planned?
Why do I have the feeling blue knows more than what others think?
Love it. Its so much fun to read the other side of the story.
Hmm, ISTM that Celestia and Blueblood at least are aware that the local humans were more than 'mere beasts' before the Ponies arrived. And it seems Blueblood is running a private eugenics program to correct that.
Bit like trying to drain the ocean with a bucket, but at least points for trying on Blue's part.
Are you trying to say that he's not running because shes sympathetic and pathetic, or trying to say hes staying because she's pathetic, not because she's sympathetic.
Excellent chapter! I can't wait for another one!
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The Royal Guard's SS division? :O
4308365 ...adds death to characters?...
I liked the chapter but the theme of 'ponies are evil' is being played a bit to strongly for my taste, I personally wouldn't mind a little something that is on a lighter note here and there. Looking forward to future chapters.
Excellent chapter. This provides some much needed context for Percy's side of the story, especially Celestia's behaviour. Once again you turn Blueblood into a "more than meets the eye" character, not that I am complaining as this adds an entire new level to the story. Will there be some explaination on what exactly Shining did to hurt Solar Chaser? Also did you intend for Solar Chaser (S.C.) to be a polar opposite for Celestia Solar (C.S.) in how they percieve Percy (monster vs sage)?
And here are two small typos.
4308442 Blueblood's planning to do the very thing Celestia is considering: use Percy to breed some intellect back into the human populance. He is even aware that humans used to be smarter than they are in his day and age, however word of that reached him. Now we just need to figure out who exactly Buttercup is and how she told Blueblood about Percy.
4309928 There's plenty of things of lighter note happening. Ponies in this story aren't even outright evil, as that implies intent and full awareness of their actions. They just fail to care. The average pony seems cruel, self-absorbed and indifferent to the consequences of their actions, all glossed over with a happy smile and a pleasant disposition to (most) fellow ponies. They are like children refusing to grow up and prove to be a nightmare for what few adults there are, such as Celestia and Cadence.
Nice just nice!!
The idea that the ponies are cruel children that don't know how to or don't want to grow up seems to be recurring theme in your stories. In this one however, I think that it is very well developed. How many more species would they have enslaved if they had the chance?
I wonder what their reaction would be to going to earth and realizing that that for the most part that we human treat horses better than the pony treat humans.
Is it weird that when I read 'country mare" I thought of Granny Smith?
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The potential was near infinite but this one was the best in my opinion.
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I was thinking Granny Pie
Sex demon from Tartarus sounds like an album title, and that's neat,
Avacados? Is there something I'm missing here?
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In case you havent figured it out yet, in the YHaY universe, Equestrian humans are deathly allergic to avocados.
HA she shit herself
More and more I am pulled into the intrigue of what humans were. Excellent pacing.
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All aboard the grammar nazi
Panzer IVtrain!la historia es interesante pero leer dos capĂtulos de lo mismo es tedioso