It's funny enough, and quite random.

3677193 Oh Really?

"I lied."

"You're fired."

"Happy Trails Hans."

Hurray for italics where they shouldn't be!!

Dear TheWraithWriter,
I regret to inform you that this story does not befit the group Guns of Equestria. I am afraid I will have to remove it from the group. My sincere apologies. Your writing is very good and raving funny! However, it does not fit with the premise of the group. I wish you good tidings in your endeavors and will await a new chapter for this fic,

Stay strong,

1000Fights

3677733

3677769 Ah, whoops, I forgot you can only see what I've uploaded.
Later chapters will contain guns and gun play.
May I resubmit for approval when the story is complete?

3677823
In that case, just re-upload it to the group when you add said chapters. I'm sorry for the mix up.

3677833 It's 'kay. It's my fault anyway.

She Ships Dilda

Really? NO, REALLY, REEEEAAAALLLYYY? REEEEAAAAA-F***ING SERIOUSLY!!!!!
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(A Mass Effect reference? In my FimFiction.net!?)

My names Commander Shepard and this is my favorite story on the Citadel.

a certain lilac unicorn. She was wearing a rather lecherous grin and some silky socks. As Shining watched, mute, a good sized peach was levitated up into the mare’s hooves.

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By the way, I love this story...

3678366 Awwwww.
This story loves you too!

So bizarre, yet it can't help but read.

3678631 Yessssssss....
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3678660
Must...resist...reading...
Can't...STOP!!!!!!!!

3678681 Yes.
YES!
Give me your views.....
GIVE THEM TO ME!
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3678695
You may have won this battle but the war is far from over!

my buttocks were no where near the idea of ready much less physically ready for this update!

i just read the first two chapter and i nearly die from laughter . good job *doing this while favoring story*

3678840 Tis not a good day til I've nearly killed someone.

3678960 what *slowly backs away from crazy pony*

3679017 *Whispers in your ear*
"You mean the one right behind you?"

3679037
O.O I'm dead now am I *said in a scare voice*

3679053 ......Shit.
Where the hell am I supposed to hide a body this time of year?

...I think that both the Alicorn and House Sparkle Lineage suffer from the genetic disease known as "Blue-Screen Syndrome". This is mostly prevalent in ponies with high levels of magical potential. It is also characterized by sudden bouts of insanity over small (To the situation), inconsequential issues. The disease, in both phases of Insanity and Blue-Screen, is usually resolved within twenty to thirty minutes.

3679187 .............
That sounded way to complicated and factual for this story.
But that's not going to stop me from stealing it for another fic.

Funniest and most random story I've read on this site! Though I do feel sorry for Truth though hope she's ok!

3679224 It's only stealing if it is not given.

Like the rest of your works, I enjoyed this story and the humor was great XD Look forward to seeing more of this story Side note, why the buck was Cadence having a bitch fit? Did she forget that she was totally cheating on Shining for what...a bit over 9 months? And had a baby with her? Jeez. Some mares

It's like freaking Jeopardy up in here.

Lets watch some Jeopardy shall we?? I crack myself up!

3679881 Don't worry. All shall be explained.

Considering Cadance had a 6 month affair with Chrysalis AND they had a foal together, I'd say Shining has a green light to some side action.

Ok before I start reading all i go is a 2 liter bottle of Mccormick 80 proof Vodka lets do this

Damn I was expecting more I am disappointed at this drinking game.

One question: What is with all the damn peaches lately?

3687156 i know where the fuck did this peache trend come from because i have no clue whatsoever

ahahahahahahahahahaa......

Jegus fucking hell, this is probably one of the best thing we've ever read for all of infinity.
I think we just layed here for like five minutes laughing our asses off.
He's not joking, it's a pretty good record, but not the best. I think the best record was like 15 minutes. Just 15 minutes of the two of us laying here and laughing until we cried.
Many unwarranted tears were she'd that day.
~Sylpheed and Eli

3687156 3687644 It comes from this series of Blogs by Obs. Peaches > Started > Here

I loved it all it had me LOTF I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.

Why does that outburst remind me of "Of Princesses and Changelings"?

dafuq did i just read..?

Shining.exe has stopped working. Processing the error.

Oh, I'm gonna have fun with this story!

3687644 I know in japanese culture the peach is considered a fruit of fertility and sexuality so maybe there's something there

Pfft. Stop breaking Shining's brain, Chryssie!

4128887 magic

Also: It's the WriathWriter Drinking Game!
Every time a character drinks, so do you!

No. I'm not thirsty.