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Gosh if I'd known the only thing I had to do was write a non-consensual sex scene into a fic to get you guys to finally comment I would have written one much sooner.

>(*P.S. No good cover arts with Prince Lune... sorry for no cover image.*)

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so heart wrenching!!! i have had that happen to me one time..... i was originally one guys boyfriend then my boyfriend loved another and then eventually we had a three way relationship and then finally i left them both cause i saw there was no room for me and m love for the one i had fallen in love with before. the other guy was ok but in the end my heart was shattered and well now im with a guy who truly loves me for me and wouldnt love another the same way.

3554902great story my friend cant wait for more

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Finally, cover art! (*I secretly avoid derpibooru... shocking business goes on there.*)

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Thank you sir, it's always good to see a new commentator. Anything specific you liked?

3555198 Everything my good man

3555198 what goes on there?....

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Turn the filters to All images, scroll through the galleries. I did, and the things that cannot be unseen... terrible.

3555215 gore/grimdark and other nasty stuff like fluffy ponies are all hidden under spoiler tags by default though , if you didn't like what you saw when you turned that off why not just turn it back on?.....

well... still not into M/M but i have that is one fine story

a bit too much forgiving after what happened in the story (won't spoiler)

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Out of curiosity... why are you here if you don't like M/M? Not trying to be rude, nor pry into your business, but most ponies just kind of avoid the gay shipping & handling parts of the site if they don't like it.

“If you do not haul your plot up these stairs, I’ll take you on the couch instead of the bed.”

My thoughts: Meeps

Going from the first third or so of this chapter, I still am not convinced by Solaris.

I wanted to see Felt angry. There is no excuse for what Solaris did, and he sure as hell should spend the rest of the fic making up for it.

Rape someone and make up a sob story to make them love you.
Wish that worked with women. (zing!)

This is becoming a bit of a forced cringe-fest, although it's moreso the character's reactions (I was expecting at least some anger at the rape, and the affection really pushed it) than any issues with the quality of writing.
That said, it is a good story, hopefully I can follow through with this one.

Shame to see another submissive pony X royalty ship story, I've always found the reverse to be more interesting.