In an attempt to recapture a sense of belonging, Prince Lune hires a new assistant. One he, and the other Equestrian alicorns, all may be infatuated with.
3563752 i'm not into pure M/M... but i don't disaprove a story just becouse it's M/M your story does have clop parts but it has a story there... not just pure clop
i like to read good storys, don't care what they are if they are good
Know Your Meme has a whole gallery full of Reaction Macros! I always go there for my .gifs.
Great! We need new bronies around here. The idea pool gets stale if you stick around too long. Look at me, I've been around since this whole brony craze started and been a loyal fan to the show the whole time (*Even though I question Hasbro's creative decisions*). See, things have gotten... stagnant around here. Just last week there were four fics in the featured box all revolving around estrus. The amount of fresh ideas we have is running low, so new bronies are really just what the fandom doctor ordered. Good to know we're still getting people to watch after... well, after the vines, questionably coloured potions, tail removal... you get the point. Our image has isn't the best right now.
3564160 know "Know Your Meme" just didn't think i was that surprising to have, a "new" brony... good to know some people still have their mind into writing good storys and not just popular ones
as for myself, while i'm no writer or artist (god has forsaken me on this things... have no skill) so i enjoy reading good storys when i can find them.
as for S4... yes...
well, after the vines, questionably coloured potions, tail removal... you get the point.
more or less saying LET THERE BE CLOP, just too easy...
I am rather enraptured with this story, however there were some slight anatomical miscommunications represented in this chapter that I suggest you take a look at. the medial ring is the name for the ring on the stallion, as opposed to the taint, which is the area between the ass and genitals. just want to help clear up any confusions, overall, good read, keep it up.
This was very sensual. I love how you focus on characters' thoughts and emotions related to sex. I think it is much less important what characters do than why they do it and why they do it this way and not another. I think only a few erotic stories here made me feel present like this one did. Thank you for the good reading and I hope you will write more! I guess I should also check your other stories.
Also, while I am not a native English speaker myself, I find grammar and spelling of this story on the highest level, at least comparing to other fanfiction. I did spot some typos, I think, but I was too involved in the plot to remember them.
And original content is much appreciated in our self-proclaimed high-intelligent circles. Thanks again for the good story.
Thank you both for reading, and telling me your thoughts about the fic. I'm going to answer both of your questions in one paragraph. Firstly, I'm very grateful that Gavin took the time to correct my anatomical terminology; using the wrong words in such a fic is inexcusable, and the fact that I have a proofreader in the audience eases my paranoia that somehow in these 5,000 word plus chapters I missed something. As for Amuns, I must say that I'm surprised you find my English to be more correct than most. See, I actually write (and speak) with a slight dialect, which comes out whenever I write words like flavor or color. I tend to spell them flavour or colour, amongst other things. The fact that I'm good enough to write for you guys is astounding to me, and the fact that you can understand my confusing thoughts when I write them makes me doubly happy. Thanks a ton for commenting and helping me improve, guys. Keep up the good work.
Writing flavour and colour this way? I heard this is an obscure dialect known as British English. Few know of it, and even when presented with evidence, people usually dismiss it as just a text with some spelling errors. Funny thing, your fanfiction.net profile says you live in the US. How come you tend to use British?
Lune smiled and kissed my forehead as my eyes fluttered shut. “As long as you remember me fondly, it doesn’t matter how far you wander from me. So long as you come back.”
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i'm not into pure M/M... but i don't disaprove a story just becouse it's M/M
your story does have clop parts but it has a story there... not just pure clop
i like to read good storys, don't care what they are if they are good
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Aww, shucks. You think my fic's good. That means a lot.
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if i wouldn't think it's a good fic i wouldn't read it past the first chapter
i read a good fic for the story, if it's good i don't mind some clop in it, even M/M clop, just adds to the story.
in your case i find Felt and his mark original, didn't read something like that before so i deem it good for me to continue to read more
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By the stars somepony who actually likes original content! Where have you been hiding?! I thought such thinkers were all but gone!
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LOL.... that pic
yes, i love good original story and OC ponys,
as for where i've been hiding, thats more simple... i wan't around, i'm a new brony, 2~3 month tops...
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Know Your Meme has a whole gallery full of Reaction Macros! I always go there for my .gifs.
Great! We need new bronies around here. The idea pool gets stale if you stick around too long. Look at me, I've been around since this whole brony craze started and been a loyal fan to the show the whole time (*Even though I question Hasbro's creative decisions*). See, things have gotten... stagnant around here. Just last week there were four fics in the featured box all revolving around estrus. The amount of fresh ideas we have is running low, so new bronies are really just what the fandom doctor ordered. Good to know we're still getting people to watch after... well, after the vines, questionably coloured potions, tail removal... you get the point. Our image has isn't the best right now.
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know "Know Your Meme" just didn't think i was that surprising to have, a "new" brony...
good to know some people still have their mind into writing good storys and not just popular ones
as for myself, while i'm no writer or artist (god has forsaken me on this things... have no skill) so i enjoy reading good storys when i can find them.
as for S4... yes...
more or less saying LET THERE BE CLOP, just too easy...
I am rather enraptured with this story, however there were some slight anatomical miscommunications represented in this chapter that I suggest you take a look at.
the medial ring is the name for the ring on the stallion, as opposed to the taint, which is the area between the ass and genitals.
just want to help clear up any confusions, overall, good read, keep it up.
This was very sensual. I love how you focus on characters' thoughts and emotions related to sex. I think it is much less important what characters do than why they do it and why they do it this way and not another. I think only a few erotic stories here made me feel present like this one did. Thank you for the good reading and I hope you will write more! I guess I should also check your other stories.
Also, while I am not a native English speaker myself, I find grammar and spelling of this story on the highest level, at least comparing to other fanfiction. I did spot some typos, I think, but I was too involved in the plot to remember them.
And original content is much appreciated in our self-proclaimed high-intelligent circles. Thanks again for the good story.
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Thank you both for reading, and telling me your thoughts about the fic. I'm going to answer both of your questions in one paragraph. Firstly, I'm very grateful that Gavin took the time to correct my anatomical terminology; using the wrong words in such a fic is inexcusable, and the fact that I have a proofreader in the audience eases my paranoia that somehow in these 5,000 word plus chapters I missed something. As for Amuns, I must say that I'm surprised you find my English to be more correct than most. See, I actually write (and speak) with a slight dialect, which comes out whenever I write words like flavor or color. I tend to spell them flavour or colour, amongst other things. The fact that I'm good enough to write for you guys is astounding to me, and the fact that you can understand my confusing thoughts when I write them makes me doubly happy. Thanks a ton for commenting and helping me improve, guys. Keep up the good work.
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Writing flavour and colour this way? I heard this is an obscure dialect known as British English. Few know of it, and even when presented with evidence, people usually dismiss it as just a text with some spelling errors.
Funny thing, your fanfiction.net profile says you live in the US. How come you tend to use British?
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Long story short, I'm from there but I moved here. I regret that decision immensely.
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