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It's a really nice story, and I love it.
But I just noticed something.
"And indeed he did. Eggs, fresh apples, and orange juice."
Well I don't think ponies eat eggs from another creatures.
Huh...an old person who's okay with homosexual relationships, you don't see that every day...
Great job on this chapter, I'm a bit of an appledash fan, so I rather enjoyed this one
Ehh... I don't know. This whole romance thing seemed to appear completely out of nowhere, and it was terribly rushed.
Oh well. I'll keep on reading, I guess.
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^this
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Agreed. It went from enjoyable and reasonable AppleDash friendshipping, to random PENT UP FEELINGS, to liplock, with a speed that would make Dash herself's head spin.
It just kind of feels shoehorned in there, really. Still a good story, but... this chapter pretty much had me stopping and looking at what I had just read incredulously through most of it.
Just, I dunno. Pace yourself a bit. Don't stampede towards the makeouts.
I dont know, i think it plays perfectly into rainbow dashes spontainious personality, (and it might just turn outo be her misunderstanding her feelings for her savior) but i LOVE it!:
Well i saw thisone comin though not that fast, but anyways.i like it so far, keep on writting good sir/ma'am
319027 well i dont remember seeing any cake or cupcake dat didnt had eggs or milk on em which are from other animals. This makes the ponies omnivorous.
Like nearly everybody else I also have something to whine about the breakfast. I'm okay with the eggs and the milk, but the orange juice? We are on an apple farm, let them drink apple juice. The whole chapter they drink apple juice, why not at breakfast?
I suppose I can attempt to settle the whole egg thing. Every pony else seems to have covered the pacing subject already. I'll be honest and say that I don't know how much longer I'll be reading this. The pacing for the entire story is off and I feel like RD's problems have been solved far too quickly and without much difficulty. Anyhow, the egg thing. In Owl's Well That Ends Well, Pinkie offers Spike a quiche, a dish that cannot be made without eggs. In addition, Fluttershy keeps chickens as seen in Stare Master. Ponies do eat eggs.
Edit: Now that I'm not on my phone, I'll add more.
Much like the eggs you'd buy at the grocery store, the eggs that ponies use wouldn't be fertilized— that is to say that there's no chance of them hatching in the first place. Ponies wouldn't have a problem with eating something that was never going to live anyways. Also, in Sisterhooves Social, one of the events is the egg carry. Ponies seem to have no problem letting those eggs drop, implying once again that there'd be no issue eating them. (Also in the same episode, Rarity cooks eggs.) Finally, eggs are a vital ingredient in most baked goods. Leaving them out makes for some rather disastrous results.
I'm not entirely sure where people get the idea that eggs are something ponies wouldn't eat. There's overwhelming evidence supporting just the opposite.
9 chapters with 1-4 comments
1 chapter with AppleDash = 11 comments.
Allll-riiight
I loved the story untill this. Why?! Why must you do shipping?!
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to the guy above me!
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Applejack said, before plopping a brown cowpony hat down on Rainbow's head, nearly identical to hers.
A stetson, its called a stetson. Might of fucked of the spelling
735258 But it is well established that they are herbivorous...thats why they eat things like sunflower sandwitchs. I guess its just a plot hole with the show.
I'm a huge AppleDash fan so I like that part just... It was rushed way too much into 3 paragraphs...
1236761 Not really, in all actuality everything is technically omnivorous, all animals contain the stomach acid needed to process meat, herbivores just can't process it as well. As such carnivores can't process fruits and vegetables as well either, but if they really tried they could in fact eat plants (just not leafy greens) without major consequence. And I'm pretty sure, not 100% though, that the consequence of them eating leafy greens is Montezuma's Revenge.
did not see this coming...
1965457 I felt the same way. It did feel a bit rushed, but maybe that's just me comparing it to other romance fics. I'm not going to judge or anything, I'm just going to keep on reading! :3 So far, I am enjoying it!
Me approve very much of zea shippings
Heartwarming, and truly romantic chapter. I see this AppleDash shipping evolving into a strong, loving one during the course of this story.
CALLED IT!
The romance and sex tags gave it away.
1236761 Stetson's are cool
4090658 I heel it too.
5434776 really? I was detecting carameldash
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Yuppies. You're addicted to Appledash
Y'know, don't get me wrong, I am enjoying this so far. But I really do have to frown at the ol' 'kiss and run' mechanic.
If someone did that to me i'd head-slap 'em first...then i'd think about kissing 'em back.
Okaaay, that escalated quickly...
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Just a lil bit
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It's a little more complicated then that, she looked at har awaiting a respsne and then when she didn't get one she panicked and run away. It's stupid but makes sense for the situation, Rainbow has been through a lot lately.