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you're jabbing my funny bone with the clever hilarity that is this new discord(officially named Delirium)
LOL
hehehe im liking the jokes.
Need more.
Also, you might want to look a bit into some of the sentences, some of them sound kinda off. At least to me.
You're alive?!
Yaaaaaaaayyyyy!
Thing is,He isnt cruel,He isnt unjust,And realistically i dont think he actually has any malice towards anyone at this point,Hell,Id even go so far as to say he still has a somewhat standard set of morals......Which,Considering that ponies think chaos is evil,Is the exact opposite of what they'd expect,Hence chaotic.......Oh chaos,You unpredictably predictable bastard you
Do try to not make him perfect.
Their is nothing more boring than a protagonist that has everything going perfectly for him.
This'll be good. Rainbow Dash, the fastest pony alive is gonna lose in an Olympic swimming pool!
-Clay the Draconequus
3726135 Near perfect is fine, if he eventually faces challenges which can push him to his limit.
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Pedobear world be proud...well depending on laws.
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Can anyone give an actual age to any of the main characters. I mean 5 of the 6 live on their own.
3738175 good question. Lets take what bit of information we have and try to make a educated guess. When twilight went threw the magic glass thing she was in high school, she looked roughly 16 then. Know take onto account that they evolved from a species were a colt is ready for mateing by age 2 so I'd say 14-16 is a good guess. And from there we can create more theories such as the ponies have a lesser education system... and so on.
Jesus I love this guy. He's perverted, devilish, funny, witty, a smart ass, and just evil enough to be chaotic but he is not evil. Really want to see more!
3791902 Yeah that is what I meant to say.
Is this humanized crap going to be permanent? I wouod pike to know befor I read any further.
So does the trap leave them human until further notice?
Kek that last line made me giggle uncontrollably!!!! xD
Was that a "No Game, No Life" reference? Even if unintentional it is a good one.
3738175 to answer your question you posed so long ago 16. Well this is if that new FIM movie trailer is not a sick joke by Hasbro. In the trailer discord put twilight around 15( him and his speechess) going.on 16. We can can assume and confirm many theorys with this information.
By the gods, I thought that I was the only one who thought this
OK, I like this. You seem to have settled the tense and POV. Just some missing punctuation here and there; a few sentences could probably be rephrased a bit better.
Will she turned back to a pony
For someone who wqs kidnapped she seems pretty calm and accepting of this guy not even mad at him shes also very quiet someone like rainbow dash would be kickin and screaming at him and constantly trying to escape
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You have to remember that never in the show, Discord has threaten anyone with death, yet delirium presentes himself by tying her wings and leaving her on a cloud, she also showed signs of fear when he raised his voice. She is afraid, therefore I assume either she is playing along or trying not anger him too much.