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Awesome. When's the next chapter gonna be?
Moar. That is all.
It's just not fair..
The chapters, they are just too short.
Can I has more chapters please?
On another note, this is turning out very nicely please keep up the good work.
Yes awsome. Can he please make minons to serve him
Nice job mate. 1 bugger down, 5 to go
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When I get far enough a head I will start releasing more than one chapter at a time. Right now I would rather keep a steady pace then leave you guys waiting for more than two weeks.
There are some longer chapters coming up.
*Sarge-like angry grumbling* You filthy front-stabbing Blue! I hope you brought your wallet, 'CAUSE THE RENT IN HELL GETS PAID IN ADVANCE!!! You with your short chapters and epic plotline. Prepaare to tast my patented brand of Red justice! *cocks shotgun*
why was I smiling like a madman while reading this?
YES!
It's brilliant. That image. The lord of Chaos being so very very neat. It boggles the mind, and makes me grin like crazy. Ooohhh, this is going to be good.
I've seen it done before, just not as good as you've done so far. Thanks for giving me a good story.
-Clay the Draconequus
Liked the clothes you gave him......really don't understand the need for swords and knifes tough, he is the new spirit of chaos after all.
3657053 it's about sending a message. I feel a colt peacemaker sends a better message tho.
3655918 Um Sarge,It isnt loaded......*tosses Shotgun shell*
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Yes it would but would the ponies know a gun when they see one?
.... Excepting Pinky
3657444 dash used a starting pistol in the pet episode, also a colt peacemaker is a beautiful weapon.
Longer chapters please.
3657357 *catches shell* Oh right. Thank you Simmons. Now then... Doctor Sarge says Take two barrels of this shotgun and CALL ME WHEN YOU'RE DEAD!!!
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Warning subject is attempting to introduce foreign elements into test environment. Releasing Agent (Baked) Alaska A.I. unit
3660250 Your welcome sir!
The lack of commas in this story is probably the only thing I don't like. Great story, enjoying it heaps, but the sentences string together too awkwardly without them.
3657530 wait... What?!
Ha
I thought I saw that there
4915749 Yeah just re-watch the episode.