Rarity and Spike head north. Their mission? Find and retrieve the plans for a weapon that could turn the tide of a once-hopeless war. It seems like a romantic getaway in the snowy mountains. But nothing could be farther from the truth...
Alright, jump off a 100ft cliff and take the brunt of the damage for yourself and Rarity. Broken wrist, pierced thigh, possible broken collar bone, a seriously injured back, not to mention a near death experience from hypothermia. What's that? You want to have sex? Yeah, I'm good for it. Since the sarcasm font has yet to be invented I'm going to say that that sentence is 100% accurate, at least in accordance with what I can do.
It's great to see the heroes alive and well in this update and it was wonderful to see Rarity and Spike finally consume their love for each other in the heat of the moment. Who knows what can come out of a "Special moment" like that...
All I can say is that this was a great emotional passage and a great way to push these characters and give them renewed strength, both physically and emotionally towards their goal.
Great job all together and please do keep putting up such great work upon a wonderful story.
3544780>>3545715>>3547937 In a way, 'action movie logic' is always active for when it would bring out the best in the story. There are times we strive for more realism, and times we say, to hell with it, this is what we want to do!
Glad you all enjoyed it--we're gonna keep this thing rolling right along, it only gets better from here.
I, like most on this site, have read my fair share of clop, be it rushed and nonsensical or taken slow and sensually.
This?
My good sir, this was FAR from clop. This was pure, unfiltered, unadulterated romance of the most potent caliber. It was balanced between quick and sensual, taking into account everything from his inexperience to her caring, gentle understanding. I could feel my heart literally fluttering in my chest as I progressed through the ending of this chapter. The action, the drama, the suspense and mayhem were, as always, to die for, but that moment... That one moment when the boy became a man, when two became one, when a light blossomed in the dark...
It was like nothing I've ever read before, and no amount of dime-store romance or "clop for clop's sake" fics can ever hope to outshine even a single SENTENCE of this. My friend, when I first saw that you had posted this story, you had my curiosity. Now that I've read this chapter?
Alright, jump off a 100ft cliff and take the brunt of the damage for yourself and Rarity. Broken wrist, pierced thigh, possible broken collar bone, a seriously injured back, not to mention a near death experience from hypothermia. What's that? You want to have sex? Yeah, I'm good for it. Since the sarcasm font has yet to be invented I'm going to say that that sentence is 100% accurate, at least in accordance with what I can do.
Also:
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Another good chapter and looks like Spike got some love. Took falling off a cliff and almost dying but he probably isn't complaining.
It's great to see the heroes alive and well in this update and it was wonderful to see Rarity and Spike finally consume their love for each other in the heat of the moment. Who knows what can come out of a "Special moment" like that...
All I can say is that this was a great emotional passage and a great way to push these characters and give them renewed strength, both physically and emotionally towards their goal.
Great job all together and please do keep putting up such great work upon a wonderful story.
Whew! Too hot for reading at work; glad I waited until I got home! Well done Sir,
Spike's collarbone must not be too bad; I can't imagine making that... arrangement work without the use of one's upper torso and shoulders,
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In a way, 'action movie logic' is always active for when it would bring out the best in the story. There are times we strive for more realism, and times we say, to hell with it, this is what we want to do!
Glad you all enjoyed it--we're gonna keep this thing rolling right along, it only gets better from here.
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I ain't complainin',
Besides, you know Realism and I aren't on speaking terms anyway... bitch broke up with me on a post-it note,
This just keeps getting better!
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At least you got a note
I, like most on this site, have read my fair share of clop, be it rushed and nonsensical or taken slow and sensually.
This?
My good sir, this was FAR from clop. This was pure, unfiltered, unadulterated romance of the most potent caliber. It was balanced between quick and sensual, taking into account everything from his inexperience to her caring, gentle understanding. I could feel my heart literally fluttering in my chest as I progressed through the ending of this chapter. The action, the drama, the suspense and mayhem were, as always, to die for, but that moment... That one moment when the boy became a man, when two became one, when a light blossomed in the dark...
It was like nothing I've ever read before, and no amount of dime-store romance or "clop for clop's sake" fics can ever hope to outshine even a single SENTENCE of this. My friend, when I first saw that you had posted this story, you had my curiosity. Now that I've read this chapter?
You have my attention.