Yeah I would like to see you continue that story if anything to see a possible back story of why Sunset break up with Flash and if she will do anything now that she has a new one, or what did the protagonist will do now that he has the queen bee at his disposal, did he will try to change her for the better or did the queen find her king?
When I seen this was with Sunset, I was wondering where you were going with this - either human or pony. While I didn't really care for the movie, Sunset Shimmer is still a hot character, and really, who doesn't think about breaking a mean girl with sexually punishment.
Great Job! I know it says complete, but maybe you will change your mind later and do more stories. You got a real knack for this. Hope you keep it up!
3467084 Morning after pills are a wonderful thing. The thought did occur to me as well, but some things you just have to skip over because they take the reader out of the moment too much. It's true, though, that sometimes I take liberties with clop, and I make no excuses there. They're meant to be wish-fulfillment, and sometimes I gloss over unpleasant details of how a situation would 'really' go.
3466654 I actually have a whole bunch of these, kept mostly in a pastebin. The more thoroughly fleshed out stories I put here, but I have a bunch of incredibly fetish-heavy (futanari, lactation, and the like) shorter works as well, and some joke one-shots on top of it. I don't put them here because they're more porn for porn's own sake, and not everybody goes for the really kinky stuff like that. There will probably be more of these, but I'm not in a hurry.
3465535 He won't try to change her, but she will regardless. Sunset Shimmer has spent all of her life dominating everyone she meets; the humiliation of being so completely and easily controlled was a very new experience for her, and wound up turning her on more than she could ever possibly have imagined. She'll hesitate and dither about for a while, but in another couple weeks - at most - she'll be begging the protagonist for more. He'll oblige her, but also refuse to put up with any of her bullshit. Sunset will gradually settle into a routine as his submissive little girlfriend, and his continued refusal to put up with her megalomania will gradually transform her into a much more humble character.
3465474 Perhaps, but that might take a writer more skilled than me. For the time being, I am in eager anticipation of the imminent season 4, and can only imagine how it might impact what I write next. Cheers!
3467296 Aww so you have some plans for the future, yeah, now I'm wonder what is going to happen the day after? If she is going to walk around that they are an item or run away confused of how turn on she was being his bitch? Or if the protagonist though it was a one night stand and move on and try to find a girlfriend only to find Sunset very jealous…perhaps a teenager Milky Way
I'm not an EG fan but this was my favorite chapter out of all of them. I have probably l read this chapter 10 times since I favorited this story and the others maybe 2 or 3.
good one
....Damnit....I kinda want a continuation of this....Or for it to get its own story.....this is just one of those things thats too good to not keep
Yeah I would like to see you continue that story if anything to see a possible back story of why Sunset break up with Flash and if she will do anything now that she has a new one, or what did the protagonist will do now that he has the queen bee at his disposal, did he will try to change her for the better or did the queen find her king?
When I seen this was with Sunset, I was wondering where you were going with this - either human or pony. While I didn't really care for the movie, Sunset Shimmer is still a hot character, and really, who doesn't think about breaking a mean girl with sexually punishment.
Great Job! I know it says complete, but maybe you will change your mind later and do more stories. You got a real knack for this. Hope you keep it up!
Uhh, I think it's necessary it bring up that, unlike ponies, sunset can get pregnant at any time of year...
3467084
Morning after pills are a wonderful thing. The thought did occur to me as well, but some things you just have to skip over because they take the reader out of the moment too much. It's true, though, that sometimes I take liberties with clop, and I make no excuses there. They're meant to be wish-fulfillment, and sometimes I gloss over unpleasant details of how a situation would 'really' go.
3466654
I actually have a whole bunch of these, kept mostly in a pastebin. The more thoroughly fleshed out stories I put here, but I have a bunch of incredibly fetish-heavy (futanari, lactation, and the like) shorter works as well, and some joke one-shots on top of it. I don't put them here because they're more porn for porn's own sake, and not everybody goes for the really kinky stuff like that. There will probably be more of these, but I'm not in a hurry.
3465535
He won't try to change her, but she will regardless. Sunset Shimmer has spent all of her life dominating everyone she meets; the humiliation of being so completely and easily controlled was a very new experience for her, and wound up turning her on more than she could ever possibly have imagined. She'll hesitate and dither about for a while, but in another couple weeks - at most - she'll be begging the protagonist for more. He'll oblige her, but also refuse to put up with any of her bullshit. Sunset will gradually settle into a routine as his submissive little girlfriend, and his continued refusal to put up with her megalomania will gradually transform her into a much more humble character.
3465474
Perhaps, but that might take a writer more skilled than me. For the time being, I am in eager anticipation of the imminent season 4, and can only imagine how it might impact what I write next. Cheers!
3467296
Aww so you have some plans for the future, yeah, now I'm wonder what is going to happen the day after? If she is going to walk around that they are an item or run away confused of how turn on she was being his bitch? Or if the protagonist though it was a one night stand and move on and try to find a girlfriend only to find Sunset very jealous…perhaps a teenager Milky Way
3467296And I'm in no need to rush you. If it fits with what your doing now than I can't wait to see it. Catch you later!
And thus my spanking fetish was born.
With no regrets.
Hot damn this is a good one!
ohmigosh I need to save that!
moar sunset shimmer
I'm not an EG fan but this was my favorite chapter out of all of them. I have probably l read this chapter 10 times since I favorited this story and the others maybe 2 or 3.
*Breaths in*
WOO BABY THAT WAS GOOD!