awesome stories, but you have quite a few spelling errors. Might wanna get an editor if you do more fics, or if you feel like fixing these ones. all in all, wonderful!
Thanks, I appreciate it! I do have some deliberate typos that I know of: I have a bad habit of sometimes deciding the given spelling of an actual word or phrase is stupid and my way is better. Forehoof as a single word, for example, because fore hoof looks stupid. Or eachother instead of each-other, for similar reasons. Still, I'll probably write more at some point - in fact I already have, I just tend to keep the really fetish-y stuff like futa relegated to Pastebin and leave it off here. In the future, I'll make more of an effort to use the proper spelling.
Yeah, some of these were not written as stand-alone stories, but quick little things thrown up in an hour or two as a direct result of a picture, and linked to said picture. In those cases they're supposed to be little more than quick, stupid excuses for a sex scene, not really stories unto themselves. Maybe I shouldn't even have posted those.
Others, I put a bit more time and effort into. Hopefully it shows.
sounds a bit like the "you will never be intimate with..." series but it looks good
awesome stories, but you have quite a few spelling errors. Might wanna get an editor if you do more fics, or if you feel like fixing these ones. all in all, wonderful!
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Thanks, I appreciate it! I do have some deliberate typos that I know of: I have a bad habit of sometimes deciding the given spelling of an actual word or phrase is stupid and my way is better. Forehoof as a single word, for example, because fore hoof looks stupid. Or eachother instead of each-other, for similar reasons. Still, I'll probably write more at some point - in fact I already have, I just tend to keep the really fetish-y stuff like futa relegated to Pastebin and leave it off here. In the future, I'll make more of an effort to use the proper spelling.
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Yeah, some of these were not written as stand-alone stories, but quick little things thrown up in an hour or two as a direct result of a picture, and linked to said picture. In those cases they're supposed to be little more than quick, stupid excuses for a sex scene, not really stories unto themselves. Maybe I shouldn't even have posted those.
Others, I put a bit more time and effort into. Hopefully it shows.
Would you will make more stories, like this one? Maybe with Photo Finish, Fleur or even a challenge one, like Gilda
you should definitely write more, these are really good
This was a great collection of clop! You should totally do more!
Keep up the great work!
Should be Pony, not person.
Other than that, great job.
... Man... (Not counting clop) this reminded me of what I love about Pinkie's inner character.
Love the ending man LOL
Also you ever think this story will come out of retirement.
I think that 'with' should be about three words to the right, there.
"Plus, you've got a really nice cock!"
That's every pony x human fic withing a single sentence
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Nice dick by the way.