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Late

A short one shot about the loss of a loved one.

Sometimes we aren't as fast as we think,
and time has a way of running out before we are ready to say goodbye.

Rainbow Dash makes her way across the country as fast as she can.
On the way she reflects briefly on her life.

In Loving Memory of DLR

(note this is the copy I sent to my proof reader so there are grammatical errors but they should be fixed by the end of the week)

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CloudWatcher

CloudWatcher #1 · Nov 12th, 2013 · 1 · ·

This is an awesome story, a few errors here and there but, what's perfection without a couple of them? Also, I wish you luck in your coming weeks as you deal with these things. I am deeply sorry.

PonyCommander

PonyCommander #2 · Nov 12th, 2013 · · ·

Thank you for the review/comment! The last month has been very hard for me and getting some of my emotions down on paper has helped me a lot.

The errors with spelling and grammar should be cleared up by the end of the week. I am waiting for the fixed copy to get back from my editor/proof reader. But, I wanted to get the story posted as it has been sitting on my computer for a few weeks.

Thanks again for the review!

pokemon285