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After a deadly dragon attack Rainbow Dash is left blind. Her dreams of joining the Wonderbolts are shattered. Her life as Equestria's number one flier are gone. Alone in the darkness that is her world she wonders how she will go on...

[Alternate Universe to Thunderbolt]

[Cover Image and General Inspiration is thanks to http://askblinddash.tumblr.com/ ]
[Edited by Alaborn!]

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 34 )

1227696

I can't resist a good Dio song. Especially something off Holy Diver.

Lets hope you can write, because the tumblr has enticed me with this idea. :trixieshiftright:

Extremely well written. I couldn't find anything wrong with it, but then again, I'm slowly losing my mind.

But that's a story for another day.

I loved it. I can't wait to see what comes next.

5/5 :moustache:

You had my curiosity, but Now you have my attention. :trixieshiftright:

Gonna be tracking this to see how it goes. :3

Looking forward to the next chapter. definitely an intense start. :eeyup:

I'M AT THE WHITE CASTLE

Blind RD always was my favorite tumblr... Faved!

This blog is so underappreciated. Will get to reading this soon.

My only reaction: WOW. I usually wait to read completed stories, but I will be eagerly awaiting each chapter you finish.

1230305 Yup got featured on EQD at some point :/

The first line of song lyrics needs to be separated and have the italics fixed, and this sentence near the end:

"Like a leaf caught in a fiery, wind she was tossed through the exit."

The comma should be after wind, not fiery.

However, it was awesome. And I can't wait for more. I love the tumblr that inspired this, and you're a good writer. Thumbs up, fav, follow.

1228176 I think that may be part of the experience. I think we are all slowly losing our minds. I will now proceed to read this story.

1231779>>1231371>>1230305>>1227818

Yes I utterly love this tumblr. Though, do note that while the concept is inspired from Ask Blind Dash the story will be different (besides the obvious Twidash).

WHERE THE BLOODY FUCK IS THE REST OF IT!? I DEMAND MORE!!!!!!
:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

I don't like this version- I'm not in it. :fluttercry:

1238347
That is why they call them PODs or Points of Divergence!

I feel like I've read this before again previously twice in the past before now. Deja Vu or Vuja De?

Dio is a vocal god, but the interspersed lyrics and Dash's awareness of them breaks it for me. Now, if Chapter 2 sees RD meet Ronnie James in the afterlife, in which he resurrects her in exchange for leaving her blind, then we're back to Game On.

Imma fav dis nao!

i love this tumblr

Has this story died?

Tuv

This is top notch stuff so far. So. Far. I shall re-iterate the requirement for "moar".

This story is epic! I really hope this story is still alive; any update on this?
Seriously, this is definitely the best version.

2030609 I'm trying. I'm in a uphill grind for inspiration to write. Family issues blah.

Thumbs up for the clever title.

2031728 Thank you for the update and don't feel the need to rush! Real life always comes first :twilightsmile:

I would like to see more of this, if you're still writing it.

When there's lightning – you know it always bring me down
Cause it's free and I see that it's me
Who's lost and never found
I cry out for magic - see it dancing in the light
It was cold - lost my hold
To the shadows of the night

There's no sign of the morning coming
You've been left on your own
Like a Rainbow in the Dark
A Rainbow in the Dark

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