My Trapped Little Ponies
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My only problem before reading.
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not even an excuse. If its not by a certain standard then you gotta step it up.
3242727 Any tips then?
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read more, you learn more. read everything. spread out.
3242589 ???
3242763
You said he was unknown, but then went on (in the same sentence) to say exactly who he was.
I'm waiting
3243187 thx man i will improve just give it time i have some good plot twists and ideas
3243972 an 11 - 12 yr ol wouldnt even be able to comprehend the shit im going to make these ponies do. but thx anyway
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My sure if I wanna read this
Not enough has happened to judge by the story, but you need an editor. I suggest looking on this site for a few groups that offer finding people for it and going through their rules on how to get in touch with an editor. This story has potential, but so many mistakes will detract from it.
Are you going to finish this?