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michaelhpd


HELLO,there im michael and i thought this be a cool thing to do so here im am.i will try to post a chapter every two day so read up.and have fun.

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You, author, have inspired me beyond belief. This is the best fic I have ever read, your ability to create drama and mystery around your work is unbelievable. The plot is top notch, the romance is amazing, your characterization really makes me feel the character, and everything you write is 120% outstanding. Please, you should write professionally and join groups to teach others on FIMFiction how to write with such perfection.

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No, my friend. I am truly amazed by this, and I'm creating 20 accounts as we speak just to track, favourite, and like this.

But, if they have that much power, could't they magic-nuke the place instead?

Yikes. :rainbowhuh: Your writing needs work. A LOT of work.

After reading the first comment I went to read and..... I don't know what is this anymore :applecry:
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Needs fixing,bro.

Ouch, wall of text and... well, bad formatting. :twilightoops:
Still, don't give up - improve it and repost.

258771 well thanx this is my first story the other people was just mean but thanx

and plus it is a draft gosh can i fix it before i get thumbd down:fluttercry:

and another thing i wont only constructive comments only not sarcasm like really its like they try to find some thing with faults so the can use the little picture now the guy with the wall o text ok thats an example but every one elese that just shows that they got no life like really who will post a picture that some already posted instead of hating on my story go look at you own cause every one have faults it human. and for people that don't know im using pinkamita dian pie i probly spell that wrong but yea so again only a draft i wrote in like 30 minutes now if i can write this in 30 minutes what can you do:ajsmug:

As a minor grammar Nazi, I am fighting the urge to take a digital flamethrower to burn this from the submitted fics... But almost... ALMOST...

Yeah, thanks for the good laugh! Lol

257832 your not bucking around now are you? :ajbemused: cuz i remember that you face hoof my story:trixieshiftleft:

That was beautiful. I can't begin to explain the pure joy that this read has inflicted on my brain. I recall chuckling a little when Derpy dropped a large rock from the sky, crushing another pony to death. Pure genius. Hurry up and get this stuff published hard cover style, so i can read it while sitting on a two thousand dollar couch, while enjoying the warm glow of a fire. Until then, i need to contact the president ASAP. He needs to be aware of this particular work. Once he gathers inspiration from it, the country can begin to improve as he guides us all to brighter future. Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

please just tell me should i take it down or no

267650wow....all of you.....just....

280668 okay look...don't let them get to you... all other got there finfic hate at. but they went on!okay... what you didn't do was leave a description title on what the story might be about..ppl like 257832 :trixieshiftleft: this luna caps get off on stuff like that...if you don't have a description title. ppl gonna think too highly of it and that when they get butt hurt about it like LunaUsesCaps :ajbemused:....description title are important, remember that...and don't give in on the hate.:coolphoto:

281732 btw there a reply thing on the far right on all comments clock on that. and that person well get a notification like i'm giving you:pinkiesmile:

267650>>281732 okay, mic! don't even listen to Twystron500 he have a lot of dislikes in hes storys! HE JELLY!

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I don't know what I find more sardonically entertaining, this fic or your comments.

307126 who cares i'm awesome! :rainbowdetermined2:

307126 okay luna what did i do? i was talking Twystron500 was being a A-hole and your ripping on me?! Twystron500 suck! and you know it luna..:coolphoto:

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