Rainbow Dash is going to try out to be a Wonder Bolt! Dashie is doing great on everything until something happen to her and it might fail her chances to become a Wonder Bolt. it could also ruin her chances to ever fly again! Then she realizes shes up against a challenge.
Alright, this is really good so far. But I see a lot of errors, no offense. I can edit it for you if you like.
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3106405 Thank you so much! :D Im going to improve the grammer though a bit! :D
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