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So you’re looking and sounding allot better now, Starshadow. I can honestly say it’s good to have you back with me; I’ve missed you so.
... Yeah... So, I was looking at the board here… What the hay did you two do while I was gone?!
Oh that... Yeah... you should probably go back and read the last chapter when you get a chance.
Wait, you mean you actually went through with that?! I thought you two were just joking about that...
Oh no, we were quite serious. Believe it or not, I was one of the first to up vote the particularly negative comments. After all, this response was exactly what we was hoping to inspire by doing this now; their impotent raging is like a wonder drug for me.
... So, you intentionally alienated your entire audience for a cheap spitegasm...? I honestly didn’t realize your hatred was so petty Miss Kris.
Don’t be ridiculous. My hatred will live on in perpetuity throughout the universe until it eventually coalesces with that of like-minded individuals into the dread lord Spite who, with Its limitless... um... spite, shall cut a bloody swath through civilization after civilization until, at long last, conscious thought is purged from an otherwise pristine universe.
*shaking her head* Wow… I-I have no words for that one…
*sighing contentedly* One day... Well, I guess that’s enough of that for now. Anyway, isn’t it time you got back to work here? We need some commentary on this latest chapter.
Seriously, why do you insist on doing this...? *sighing laboriously* So once again, we’re dragging the very darkest moments of my life out into the open. I just barely managed to claw my way out of the emotional purgatory I was left in, and now we’re right back to this... Thanks again you two.
Yeah, it’s pretty brutal... But look at it this way... the worst of it is out now.
That depends on your perspective, I guess... Anyway, right now I’m more worried about how Mas- Big Mac is going to take all this. He and AJ looked really bothered and I’ve barely scratched the surface of my history...
Try to have faith in him, dear. Your stallion has your best interests in mind when he asked this of you.
I hope so...
So Polaris is not to blame for Starshadow ending up in the auction house. Still, he's not going to be my favorite pony any time soon. He still needs to be killed, and I figure a firm couple of bucks to the head will be a fine end for him.
Grusomeness aside, whoa. Just whoa. This chapter was amazing and enthralling. Finally hearing Starshadow's backstory and her first horrible encounter with sex. It was all excellently done. Bravo. Just BRAVO!
3324142 Polaris may not have directly caused everything that happened to Starshadow but he's just as guilty of everything that happened as the stallions who used her as a rape slave
Yay! Finally something good happened to Starshadow!
Which lasted 13 lines..............
KILL THEM KILL THEM KILL THEM KILL THEM ALL!
Or better yet, turn them into the Pony Centipede!
OK WHERE DI I PUT MY OP RAGE OCs
POLARIS!!!
RUN FOR YOUR LIFE,
Cannot wait for more!
Man, I (and obviously many others) can't wait to see when Polaris will finally get what's coming to him. But what shall his comeuppance consist of, you ask? Physical pain? Torture? Slow death? No, no, no. Those kinds of punishments are far too simple. There's only one act that can possibly inflict the kind of suffering upon him that he deserves:
Burn the star family tome to cinders, right in front of him. He's one of those insufferable family pride-types, so destroying the precious family heirloom that he's in charge of will absolutely destroy him.
And as a bonus, destroying that accursed book will permanently set Starshadow free from whatever it says about her cutie mark! Well, in theory. Let's hope Polaris was too prideful to keep transcripts of the book's important passages.
grandtheftwiki.com/images/thumb/CherryPopperIceCreamCompany-GTAVC-logo.jpg/150px-CherryPopperIceCreamCompany-GTAVC-logo.jpg because im evil
So now we have THREE stallions to brutally murder
Starshadow, all the wrongs that you have experienced in your life shall not be unavenged!
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Watch the book just be empty.
Every other stallion this mare meets is a rapist.
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that depends on how you look at it. he kicked her out of the house, so it's his fault she wound up with that fillyphile
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If I understand it correctly that tome is a book of predictions made by Starswirl himself, and I believe Polaris was given specific instructions not to read it. That being said, perhaps all of this is written in that book, perhaps it's always been known that the pure blood unicorn family would eventually be "polluted" and that "pollution" would lead them to their rightful place in the world.
oh my god.
This father goes into my top list of most hated loathed and reviled fictional characters. Like right at the top with chars from novels and tv shows
This guy inspires Bitch Kid King from game of thrones levels of hate in me.
Nice work on that.
The fact there's these FILTH in Celestia's "closest" court circle, but they do what do in their jobs quite well most likely. And don't reveal their true selves outside where it will get them ousted.
*******
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*lynx kitten stropes your hooves with his sides, shifting between all four of them*
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
*claws an ankle...cause he's a silly creature...and a feline*
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There seems to be a trend going on here.
It seems as though we can expect this pattern from now on. The only exception will be Big Mac.... or else, krisprowler, thecamel. Or else.
I'm sad that this Celestia still seem rather naive about the working of her own noble houses....example: she have no one loyal and working for her to watch them.....this is just fuck up....you cannot allow people like that in the goverment....sadly for us in real life, no one good hold that much power
I said it once and I’ll say it again: poor starshadow!
Blast it all where's a clip of scar yelling "YOU BASTARD!!" into kimblees face when you need it? (F=MA)
Put south pole and polaris on a rocket to the center of the milky way with no life support, and feed their frozen corpses to the absolute maw of a super massive black hole and erase them from existance. This right here is just so wrong it's chilling and these two characters deserve no mercy. Starshadow... I have nothing but horror from hearing her tale...shes essentially been tortured out of having any resemblance of her own identity. It's so cruel...
Oh wow, you managed to piss off Fluttershy. Face it, Thunderlane, you are currently a dead pony flying; once Fluttershy's ticked off, nothing short of a Royal Order or physical restraints will stop her from exacting retribution.
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And considering that discord the master of chaos might be in this world as fluttershy friend this guy is in major trouble.