That's a quick update right there!

WOOOOOOOOOOO! That was awesome!

Ooh, Big Mac...! Take me harder! Nng. Please, break me to pieces! Make me useless for anypony but you...! Haa... !

Are you... are you clopping to yourself?!

Well, I mean, can you blame me? And anyway, technically, you're clopping to yourself.

... Touche...

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*sigh* clopping in public again? I thought you said you weren't into that kind of thing...

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Forgive me, Master. It's hard to control her urges on top of my own...

Wow... *facehoof* Well, at least I can say I come by this submissive streak legitimately...

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Careful what you say, Starshadow... don't make me go get Cpt. Ray.

Actually, nevermind. I don't want him here either.

3097293 I'd say there's no need to be ashamed of; self-cest is pretty popular.

sooooo do not regretthe fav on this. keep rocking it out.
good sub dom fics are hard to find and those with a slow build to it are next to impossible.
good ones at least.

This is great. So Big Mac is going to become some kind of sex fiend from being with Starshadow, and then is going to probably rape Applejack after she walks in on them. I can't wait for more.

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To be fair, Big Mac was already a bit of a fiend before I found him, he just didn't have anypony willing to share that side of himself with. Of course, I'll do as much as I can to encourage to let himself go further, but...

You don't need the Dark tag yet, mayte.

But if there's some dark stuff comin' on, and some potential wincest comin' on? I look forward to it.

This was... Pretty damn cool.
My friend always asks people wanna know why I'm called Big Mac? It is great. Like this story.

Say Applejack how do you get the fields ploughed so quickly.

we just give Big Mac a playpony and let him run up and down them all day

Hmm... I will fave this for now as I'm intrigued... but if this becomes incest, I am out of here.

Good job so far.

Can't wait for next chapter!

AWWWW YEEEAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

neeeeeeeeeeexttttttttttttttttttttttttt is fantasticcccccccccccccccccccccccc

excellent story

I NEED MOAR! Will you update soon?

Holy shit nigga! That was haaaard!

Well it's funso far, but that whole 'master' bit was awkward as fuck. Actually put the reader down with a moment that could only be summer up with "bitch, are you fer real?"

Still having a go at this though, and hey, bonus points for keeping me interested despite vinyl scratch being in it with an OC friend.

Im not going to lie this is really GOOD!! Read 5 chapt is 1 hour and I m hooked! Keep going!!!

Ok....I can see the dark theme start from here...

That's hawt.

felt like it was her first time all over again.

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Master...for some reason, that doesn’t sound too good.

Big Mac remained silent, causing Starshadow to find herself in a dilemma. She was going to cum, that much was clear, but she needed Big Mac’s permission to cum, or else she would be a bad pony, and bad ponies were punished...

Nor does that.