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DAMMIT THUNDERLANE!!!!
You just jumped to second place on my list... You better run... run, hide, and pray I never find you...
Another chapter amazingly done! I wish I could write like you two...
I'm gunna head over to that blog I found in the author's notes now...
A Humble Anonymous
~InfiniteZero
I really feel bad for Starshadow for everythig she's been through. How long is it gonna be til she tells Big Mac and everypony else everything?
Wow was I ever wrong. I thought Starshadow entered that world by choice, that her training was so deeply engrained that it took months to undo it, it's unthinkable.
Celestia dammit thunderlane. I wanna like ya, but you keep givin me reasons not to
Hoofies anyone?
Interesting twist... not the most dramatic of twists though. Sorry to be such a killjoy, but it's not a huge surprise that some random slightly known
pegasaishow character would show up along the way. Truth be told, this turns me off from this story slightly. It was fine when it was just Big Mac dealing with Starshadow and her challenges, the tension with Tavi and Scratch and then the big bad bastard dad trying to hunt down his daughter for dreadful purposes. Now Starshadow has to deal with a mistake she made that she could never correct and I fear Big Mac is going to have to hurt more than one pony now.Granted, I'm being a bit of a whiner perhaps. Of course there will be continued drama. Of course things needed to follow plot for the sake of plot. Of course something else had gone wrong in Starshadow's recovery from being a slave, which she still may not have fully recovered from... in any case, I'll keep reading. Best of luck.
Can't say I enjoyed this as much, because it seems you're throwing tons of elements into the story before resolving them or letting them sink in. Some of the writing also seems stilted, like in how the sister is being addressed. I'd say you should slow your pace a bit, don't worry, we aren't going anywhere :)
3251268 i'll bring the shotguns ......
And it just keeps getting better... I sure as hay could have happily lived my entire life without this little episode being public knowledge...
Well, there's no sense in getting all worked up about that now. Just keep forging ahead... and maybe keep an eye on your drinks for a while...
What's that's supposed to mean?
Nothing, nothing. I'm sure it's fine. You've got powerful friends here now.
Just as long as Rumble doesn't get involved... Poor little guy
Oh Thunderlane. . . You're about to get on your own personal carriage ride to hell, and here's a hint for you. Your driver is BIG, RED, AND RIPPED A FUCKING TWO STORY HOUSE OFF OF IT'S MOTHERFUCKING FOUNDATION WHILE SKIPPING!!!!!!!!
Starshadow you slut...
Why is it that some people don't like Thunderlane and make him out to be an ass of some kind?
What did Thunderlane do to you?
3251268 shall I call the fleets?
THUNDERLANE?!
You better RUN!
3251268 Humble anonymous? your not even humble in real life. Sooooo should i bring the knive collection, gun collection or ice cream scoop?
Thunderlane?!